Soul sister, my dear laotang* Teacher of mine now friend supreme Not written, missing you a lot Been afraid to write might get caught
I hope you'll be so proud of me Laotang*I've become to Lea Learned it all from you many thanks Hope to see you soon once again _ _ _ _
- Photo and Poem Copyright, Jimmiehov 2018, All Rights Reserved (The Photos were taken from a Google search--I couldn't get to the site because I was stopped, 'records of Maliciousness.' Same for the bottom one, it was supposedly a "Tattoo" choice.)
* "In the Hunan province, peasant women developed a secret language of female writing, called nu shu. A young girl was matched with a lifelong best friend, or soul sister, called her laotang, with whom she communicated by letter." (read more from Sherry's informative post, link)
NaPoWriMo 2018-05 -- Day 5, a Poem for Love's Weather
Weather for Couples; correlated with the "Life in the Fast Lane" song and a "Metaphoric Weather Forecaster
Legend: Purple: Added for reading comfort Blue: Words to Verse one and the Chorus of "Life in the Fast Land" song Black Italics: Words of the common poem I wrote Red Lines: Word in verse of the Metaphoric Weather Man Read them as: read separately through the complete 'poem', read them line 1 and 2 for the poem I crafted using the song as a base, and read them line 2 and 3, etc. for the poem with my work followed by the Weather Forecaster Metaphor
Weather for Couples;
correlated with the "Life in the Fast Lane" song
and a "Metaphoric Weather Forecaster
Verse I:
He was a hard-headed man he was brutally handsome
Another man from the hot place, liked by people
Stand by for some vivid Climate Change, it's very nice now
And she was terminally pretty
and she was dangerously wonderfully beautiful
Sunny days way too early in spring
She held him up and he held for ransom
She was disgustingly high maintenance
Storms approaching, property damage imminent
In the heart of the cold, cold city
Relations like this cool off fast
Spring weather here always cold, and icy
He had a nasty reputation as a cruel dude
He was seemingly nice, except to the people who knew him
Bring in the pets and garage the car, hail sneaking in
They said he was ruthless said he was crude
He brings in the love spat storms, it will be worse
Man is ruining the environment, motive profit
They had one thing in common
The season's days will work together
March winds, April heavy showers
They were good in bed
Together close they were so compatible
Bring May Flowers
She said, ’faster, faster.’
and she said, "can't get enough"
I promise you will like my forecast
the lights are turning red.'
It won't last forever
Enjoy, good weather ends tonight
Chorus:
Life in the fast lane
Modern technology gives a nasty boost
What do you expect now we are 'civilized'?
Surely make you lose your mind
It's so very confusing, this romance stuff
Satellites and computers, we still make mistakes
Life in the fast lane
Find a marriage counselor soon
We will have six weather projections
Are you with me so far? Love is the answer, stick with it You can take your pick from those
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(Stay tuned for a complete forecast later)
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- Photo and Poem Copyright, Jimmiehov 2011 and 2018, All Rights Reserved
- At first I was going to write my works in step with "Highway to Hell" but decided to use "Life in the Fast Lane" as with it was more in step with Paul John Deare's prompt, see link to his prompt above.
You will have to make up your own mind. Just read here first, then visit my blogs and Jim1Jim1 YouTube to figure me out. (Some blogs are unlisted but are accessible if you can find them.)
