NaPoWriMo 2018-07 -- Day 7, a Poem for Bionic man
Bionic man so cool
Why do you stare and do not speak
Speak to me in your native tongue
What have you done who did you see
What did you hear what did they say
It'll kick in at Noon, you'll see
There'll be a jolt, tingling you'll feel
Sleep 'til then o bionic man
Sleep, sleep you must, sleep, know we will
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- Photo and Poem Copyright, Jimmiehov 2018, All Rights Reserved
(Photo is my PrintScreen photo taken of Kerry's post, see below)
(Photo is my PrintScreen photo taken of Kerry's post, see below)
- I'm writing for Kerry O'Connor at the Imaginary Garden with Real Toads, Camera FLASH! ~ The April Edition, http://withrealtoads.blogspot.com/2018/04/camera-flash-april-edition.html
- I'm also linked to Day Seven of NaPoWriMo, http://www.napowrimo.net/day-seven-5/. If you click on 'PARTICIPANTS SITES' link at the top of their page you can read the poems submitted by other bloggers.
Labels: Humor(?), NaPoWriMo 2018, Poem, Real Toads, Syllabic Form
posted by Jim @ 4/07/2018 10:28:00 AM
12 comments
12 Comments:
This is a great write, Jim. Conversation with an android... very on point in the Dystopian genre... and I am a fan.
He dosn't respond to the programme. I understand the need for you to repeat your request for answers
Much🌼love
Thank you Jim I enjoyed your write...all mystery that bionic man.
"know we will" Someday. Enjoyed this,,he does indeed seem bionic,,, :-)
I like the language you've employed, the repetition, it so totally wraps this up in a wonderful way. It's a curious thing - and yeah, I like the layers implied, because I grew up watching the t.v. show and all that - and this also plays with the whole "male" archetypal ideas and all. Fun but not as easy as playing with a doll.
I really enjoyed this one! Brilliant response to the prompt, Jim 💜
I really enjoyed your take on this photo, Jim.
There's an extra charge
in your boost today
It is being more observant as poets are to be able to anticipate human emotions. Thoughtful take Dr Jim!
Hank
I remember "the" six million dollar man - the tv show- I thought he was so cool.
That face does look that way! Of course, one does think of "The six million dollar man" (if one is of a certain age, anyway) but you seem to have taken things a bit further still. Great job!
Cool & effective, Jim, esp S3. Salute!
Bionic poem Jim ;)
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