NaPoWriMo 2018-02 -- Not Running?
Stopped Dead
Stopped dead in its tracks, is it still ticking
Second hand on my clock it goes no more
Let us wait a minute and we will see Pulse in my neck I can feel it no more
Let us wait a minute and we will see
Very quiet no snoring or wheezing
Let us wait a minute and we will see
Fingers and toes they won't move anymore
Let us wait a minute and we will see
They won't close though I try nor can I blink
Let us wait a minute and we will see
Where am I now I want to know. Do you
Time is up the clock has stopped minute's gone
Digits don't work eyes can't see heart is bad
Body has gone to pot and missing too
This is a mess how can I recover
Got to get up morning's come, my alarm
It's time to see, am I dead or alive
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Poem Copyright, Jimmiehov 2018, All Rights Reserved
I'm writing for Karin at http://withrealtoads.blogspot.com/2018/04/april-second.html
I'm also linked to Day Two of NaPoWriMo, http://www.napowrimo.net/day-two-5/ If you click on 'PARTICIPANTS SITES' link at the top of their page you can read the poems submitted by other bloggers
Labels: Humor(?), NaPoWriMo 2018, Poem, Real Toads, Syllabic Form
11 Comments:
I so know the feeling! Smiles.
LOL
"Got to get up morning's come, my alarm
It's time to see, am I dead or alive "
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I, too, know this one :-) So well said “let us wait a minute and we will see” indeed we will,,
Loved that last line!
I know the feeling!!
Makes one wonder sometimes! The older I get the louder my heart beats.
Beautiful lines :)
"Let us wait a minute and we will see"
I am not sure at times even when I hear the alarm clock if I'm still ticking.
Jim— I visted yesterday but apparently none of my blogger comments took. A clever poem— well realized! Agh! Hope I am still ticking. Thanks. K.
I like the whimsical humour. (You sound alive to me.)
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