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The Mother's Advice
"For
beauty is nothing but the beginning of terror.”
Those my mother's
words, as I stepped onto the train after we'd exchanged parting
hugs. Irritated me a bit, I'm a grown girl who shouldn't need
that kind of advice.
All was well when I chose my bench seat, all forward
facing ones were taken in the section I was assigned.
Thinking
those words over, I know in the sight of many I am a pretty girl,
young adult now. Younger less aware should heed them for sure.
My
thought train was interrupted when the fellow next to edged my way,
close making me feel uncomfortable. I gave him a defensive nudge to
hint that he was sitting too close.
He
didn't take that hint, played it like an invitation to come some
closer. I jumped up, changed my seat.
Mom,
you were right.
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- Mish has a Poet tonight, Rainer Maria Rilke, chosen for us and are instructed to right a piece of prose, not more than 144 words, including the title. That first line of his poem, “The First Elegy”, Duinos Elegies, was the opening line of my writing here, The Mother's Advice.'
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