Sister, Do You Love
Your Brother?
Awake, he didn’t know
since when
Half dressed,
bathroom duties called him
But when he flushed
all Hell began
Water was gushing
everywhere
He tried to shut the
water down
Pulled the thing off
the wall instead
Water stopped, why he
didn’t know
‘Twas his sister’s
house, should he tell?
Next he knew it was
time for school
Raining now, polished
theme was due
Half mile, sister
wouldn’t drive him
Walk in rain? No way,
he’s retired
Leaving now, water
everywhere
Too deep in spots, detours
abound
Call his sister? He
may come back
And hope she’d
forgiven his mess
(Soft alarm) "Ring"
(Louder) "Ring, ring"
(Very
loud) "Ring, ring." . .. I was 'he'.
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Izzy's Real Toad post today was entitled, You could have done better....Out of Standard (link--same as above). Her challenge instructions were short and direct, "Write a poem or piece of fiction which encapsulates a lie you could have told better." The above is all a lie, it is a dream I had early this morning, just before I woke up. I left out a lot, and embellished some a bit.
There was water still coming when the scene changed to leaving for school, from the bottom pipes and from the wall cabinet above. We weren't headed for school when Sis said no ride, but rather were trying to leave for our home. Seemed the whole world was flooded. My dream didn't get us back to her house but we were thinking about that.
Seems a lot of my dreams about my missing either a class or a day at the University of Nebraska (I at one time had a recurring dream like this) . I did miss a lot of classes because I was someplace playing chess instead. Maybe that's why I dream these kind of dreams.
Labels: Jim's Life, Personal-Challenge-2014, Poem, Real Toads, Syllabic Form