Tuesday, August 22, 2023

After Rains -- a Poem for Friday Writings and dVerse Poetics

   
  Rainy Day Fun 

It had rained that day, 
or was it from the melting snow 
Puddles and small streams 
I'm with my bottle and my stick 
Salad dressing's gone 
Done its duty and discarded 
Retrieved, fuel tanks full 
Passengers and crew coming here 

I'm the ship's captain 
Counting is done all are onboard 
The ropes are untied 
We are now leaving the harbor 
Guiding with my stick 
and coming around your corner 
Wave to me please 
The lad in navy suit age eight  
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 - Poem Copyright, Jimmiehov 2023, All Rights Reserved 
 - I'm linked with Grace at dVerse Poetics,   
 - Grace has asked us, "use the word "bottle" and its contents in your poem. What is brewing inside the bottle?"
 - You can read other's poems for Grace's dVerse prompt by clicking here 
 - I am also linked with Magaly at Friday Writings #91 who has invited us to find inspiration in the phrase “muscle memory” for her prompting.  Writing for it is optional, due to lack of time I opted to bring this poem to Friday Writings.  I wasn't up on "muscle memory" so I looked it up and learned. 
 - You can read Magaly's discourse of the prompt and links to others posting by clicking here 
 - As a lad growing up on my Dad's farm playing bottle boat and my tree branch stick this was one of my favorite play times when the little streams were flowing. 
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Monday, August 21, 2023

A Date Perhaps? -- a Poem for dVerse Quadrille

[A cabin in the woods in North Louisiana. (photo © by Jimmiehov)]
  

                (A note to her)

                "Come visit me" 


                Come visit me, 

                I'm glad we met 

                Let's do again

                My house or yours


                Judged yesterday's 

                conversation 

                Long, revealing, 

                found common ground


                Pardon me if 

                I've read you wrong 

                10 Pine Lake Drive

                You've got my phone


                Please call to say 
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- Poem Copyright, Jimmiehov 2023, All Rights Reserved 
 - I am linked with Mish for dVerse Quadrille Monday #182, prompt today "pine",  
 - Quadrille Monday's poetry has exactly 44 words 
 - To reads other's Quadrille poems, click here   
     Perhaps you would like to write these also 
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