Motherless
Don't you remember when your mother died
You'd always had one
and now she's gone
Feeling you couldn't stop
tears in your eyes
You joined the orphan crowd
yet you're alone
Feeling it won't go 'way
motherless now
Then suddenly one day
it goes away
Whisked don't remember when
feeling had left
Gone just gone no more tears
life has gone on
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Friday, January 13, 2023, and now a bit on my Wheel:
The wheel repeats itself over and over again. Maybe it's stationary, scenery is same o' same o'. And then there's the one on the go, a different scene every revolution. Can we choose which we'll be, security or adventure?
My Wheel when I was a boy was a light steel spoke Wheel from a retired critter of burden. I rescued the wheel for my own.
Stationary or on the go? Well, on the go when I wanted to play. I goaded it to go with my big stick, steered it too with the stick.
We went all over the farmstead and out to the mailbox once a day. The Wheel and my stick had become my favorite outside toy. Visitors and family would say, "Here comes Jim and his Wheel."
Then one day, I don't know when or how, like the 'Motherless feeling" in my poem, the Wheel went away, gone, gone from my life. Mom to Heaven, the Wheel back to the junk pile. Life goes on.
Note: Hoop rolling is still being done, mostly with storebought equipment
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- Poem Copyright, Jimmiehov 2023, All Rights Reserved
- Photo just popped up in my message box late last night from my brother-in-law--it brought that feeling to my mind, sans tears
- I am linked with Rommy for Friday Writing #59 at,
Rommy has asked us to use the word, Wheels, if we wanted or needed a prompt. But I am sooo behind that I decided to us this one I had written for Tuesday as I was late there and only had only a few readers and have only two who left comments.
Then later tonight I added the blurb about my "Wheel toy".
- I am also first linked with dVerse Poetics hosted for prompting by Ingrid at - This was another write made sitting on the edge of my bed in the middle of the night
- You might be inspired to write with us
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