Tuesday, January 02, 2024

a first Car -- fictional poem of a car that I like

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My New Car 

Twas my very first 
To me it was slick 
and very pretty 
No glue on this beast 

Zero to sixty 
in four seconds flat 
Turtles are slower 
I'm idling one ten 

It was a hot rod 
Gave my teeth for it 
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 - Poem Copyright, jimmiehov 2023, All Rights Reserved 
 - Photo from an online sale bill, a 1969 Chevy Z28 It is for sale asking $119,999, to read about itclick here. 
 - I am linked with Rosemary at Friday Writings #108 at 
 - Rosemary has asked "us to consider the word 'Beginning' – write anything to do with that word/idea, or perhaps share something which is in itself a beginning".  
 - I chose to post this poem previously posted December 15, 2023.  
 - There I am linked with Saana at dVerse Poetics, at  
 - Saana had us to use "litotes" in our writing.  The closest that I could think of for explaining was that 'understatements' are one example. 
   Saana's formal definition states, "Defining Litotes: Litotes, as a figure of speech, is a rhetorical device used to make an understatement by negating the opposite of the intended message. A double negative is frequently used in this, leading to a positive declaration."   
 - To read others work click here. 
 - My first car was a used 1950 Studebaker, like my model:  
 1950 Studebaker Starlight coupe
[picture of my toy 1950 Studebaker Starlight Coupe, 
a cast iron model of my first car]
[I have quite a few cast iron 1:18 scale toy cars, this one included.] 
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