a first Car -- fictional poem of a car that I like
My New Car
Twas my very first
To me it was slick
and very pretty
No glue on this beast
Zero to sixty
in four seconds flat
Turtles are slower
I'm idling one ten
It was a hot rod
Gave my teeth for it
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- Poem Copyright, jimmiehov 2023, All Rights Reserved
- Photo from an online sale bill, a 1969 Chevy Z28. It is for sale asking $119,999, to read about it, click here.
- I am linked with Rosemary at Friday Writings #108 at
https://poetsandstorytellersunited.blogspot.com/ for hosting.
- Rosemary has asked "us to consider the word 'Beginning' – write anything to do with that word/idea, or perhaps share something which is in itself a beginning".
- I chose to post this poem previously posted December 15, 2023.
- There I am linked with Saana at dVerse Poetics, at
- Saana had us to use "litotes" in our writing. The closest that I could think of for explaining was that 'understatements' are one example.
Saana's formal definition states, "Defining Litotes: Litotes, as a figure of speech, is a rhetorical device used to make an understatement by negating the opposite of the intended message. A double negative is frequently used in this, leading to a positive declaration."
- To read others work click here.
- My first car was a used 1950 Studebaker, like my model:
1950 Studebaker Starlight coupe
[picture of my toy 1950 Studebaker Starlight Coupe,
a cast iron model of my first car]
[I have quite a few cast iron 1:18 scale toy cars, this one included.]
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Labels: Cars, dVerse, Fiction, First times, Poem