One Single Impression: The Passing
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The smile
we passed on the street
started with a little flirt
sweet gentle smile
I will always remember
my poor heart went pit-a-pat
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Prompt word, Choices, suggested by The Dark Lord
at The Dark Lord's Blog; the essence of creation
Find more poems at One Single Impression using "Choices" as prompt
at The Dark Lord's Blog; the essence of creation
Find more poems at One Single Impression using "Choices" as prompt
Labels: Flirty Guy, One Single Impression, One-Single-Impression, Poem, Tanka
posted by Jim @ 9/12/2010 12:35:00 AM
15 comments
15 Comments:
Wonderful moments, those.
Ah, sensational!! Loved your take - the fun element, and those special, understated moments, which so spice up things! I was wondering what you'd come up with! :)
Regards,
TDL
btw, it felt good to be back here again.. reading your works is a literal delight.
Lovely smile and a wink, sweet memory of the passing time, that should be all our treasure in life.
Oh, those moments! I love it.
Beautiful..it transports in to the magical moments of the past..
respectable flirting has always been one of my favorite hobbies - great take on the theme
What a sweet take on this prompt...I loved it. I haven't been around the blog world in awhile and it's wonderful to see your writing again. :~)
That cute statue makes my heart go pitter pat.
What a cute little bee. Was it flirting with you?
Beautiful!
I watch while the mountains crumble
This poem makes me smile...what a lovely and delightful poem Jim.
Good time you had!
Oh those are sweet moments for sure, aren't they?! Loved it- and the pic!!! Have a wonderful rest of theweek, Jim!
hmmm....I could only smile... :)
Aww! Now, what do we have in the 'sweets drawer' this evening? :)
Safe travels, Jim!
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