Sunday, September 12, 2010

One Single Impression: The Passing

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The smile

we passed on the street
started with a little flirt
sweet gentle smile
I will always remember
my poor heart went pit-a-pat


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Prompt word, Choices, suggested by The Dark Lord
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15 Comments:

At Sunday, September 12, 2010 2:39:00 AM, Blogger anthonynorth said...

Wonderful moments, those.

 
At Sunday, September 12, 2010 2:48:00 AM, Anonymous The Dark Lord said...

Ah, sensational!! Loved your take - the fun element, and those special, understated moments, which so spice up things! I was wondering what you'd come up with! :)
Regards,
TDL
btw, it felt good to be back here again.. reading your works is a literal delight.

 
At Sunday, September 12, 2010 3:19:00 AM, Anonymous Married to Singaporean said...

Lovely smile and a wink, sweet memory of the passing time, that should be all our treasure in life.

 
At Sunday, September 12, 2010 6:21:00 AM, Blogger SandyCarlson said...

Oh, those moments! I love it.

 
At Sunday, September 12, 2010 6:41:00 AM, Blogger Ramesh Sood said...

Beautiful..it transports in to the magical moments of the past..

 
At Sunday, September 12, 2010 8:53:00 AM, Blogger moe lauher said...

respectable flirting has always been one of my favorite hobbies - great take on the theme

 
At Sunday, September 12, 2010 3:59:00 PM, Blogger Sweetest in the Gale said...

What a sweet take on this prompt...I loved it. I haven't been around the blog world in awhile and it's wonderful to see your writing again. :~)

 
At Tuesday, September 14, 2010 5:45:00 AM, Blogger Nessa said...

That cute statue makes my heart go pitter pat.

 
At Tuesday, September 14, 2010 7:53:00 AM, Blogger Rebecca said...

What a cute little bee. Was it flirting with you?

 
At Tuesday, September 14, 2010 11:49:00 AM, Blogger gautami tripathy said...

Beautiful!

I watch while the mountains crumble

 
At Tuesday, September 14, 2010 8:37:00 PM, Blogger The Write Girl said...

This poem makes me smile...what a lovely and delightful poem Jim.

 
At Tuesday, September 14, 2010 10:46:00 PM, Blogger Harshad mehta said...

Good time you had!

 
At Wednesday, September 15, 2010 7:53:00 PM, Blogger Patti said...

Oh those are sweet moments for sure, aren't they?! Loved it- and the pic!!! Have a wonderful rest of theweek, Jim!

 
At Wednesday, September 15, 2010 10:29:00 PM, Blogger Amity said...

hmmm....I could only smile... :)

 
At Saturday, April 12, 2014 2:17:00 PM, Blogger restlessjo said...

Aww! Now, what do we have in the 'sweets drawer' this evening? :)
Safe travels, Jim!

 

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