Monday, August 23, 2010


Dr K pondered in his cell

Could it be possible? His best cash customer come back to life?

No way—must be a Halloween prank

Eeow!



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16 Comments:

At Sunday, August 22, 2010 6:50:00 PM, Blogger Diane said...

I like the thought that he's in prison. Gives the whole thing a new mood. :O)

 
At Sunday, August 22, 2010 6:50:00 PM, Blogger Sylvia K said...

Got to watch out for those Halloween pranks!! Great one for the day, Jim! Have a good week!

Sylvia

 
At Sunday, August 22, 2010 6:51:00 PM, Blogger Bill ~ {The Old Fart} said...

It sounds as if Doc K is having flashbacks. Lets hope it is only a dream.

 
At Sunday, August 22, 2010 7:07:00 PM, Blogger Pat said...

It's Halloween in August--yikes! Clever story, Jim. I like it.

 
At Sunday, August 22, 2010 7:16:00 PM, Blogger EG Wow said...

Halloween must be coming early this year. :) Must be confused because he's "doing time." (I have NO clue as to what I men by that!)

 
At Sunday, August 22, 2010 7:16:00 PM, OpenID sylviamorice said...

I like what you did with this. I hope the customer still has a place to keep his cash!!!

 
At Sunday, August 22, 2010 8:37:00 PM, Blogger Thom said...

I especially like the fact that he is in his cell. Brilliant my friend. Very well done. Have a great week ahead :)

 
At Sunday, August 22, 2010 10:07:00 PM, Blogger SparkleFarkle said...

Trick or trick, my dear Dr. K? Muah-ha-ha-ha-HAAA!

Great take! So...so...? So KEVORKIAN!
SparkleFarkle~~~~~*

 
At Sunday, August 22, 2010 10:29:00 PM, Blogger KB said...

Good news to hear in jail. Have a great week.

Mine’s here.

 
At Sunday, August 22, 2010 11:38:00 PM, Blogger Michael G-G said...

Some Halloween prank!

I enjoyed this, Jim. Have a good time on your hols!

 
At Monday, August 23, 2010 2:32:00 AM, Blogger MorningAJ said...

Not sure if he'd really want to see THAT customer again!
Excellent words.

 
At Monday, August 23, 2010 2:38:00 AM, Blogger anthonynorth said...

That's one scary cell :-)
Nice one.

 
At Monday, August 23, 2010 5:07:00 AM, Blogger Nessa said...

A good haunting tale. Enjoy your newest vacation. Do some relaxing for me.

 
At Monday, August 23, 2010 7:04:00 AM, Blogger SouthLakesMom said...

If any customers are coming back to life, we certainly want them to be PAYING ones! Good one, Jim.

 
At Monday, August 23, 2010 6:19:00 PM, Blogger hope said...

I would've shaken my head at the reference to Halloween but I just left a store with Halloween Candy ALREADY OUT!

Nicely done!

 
At Friday, August 27, 2010 10:11:00 PM, Blogger Susan at Stony River said...

I can't wait for Halloween myself -but I hope Doctor K gets his wish. (I want that story!)

Love it!

 

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