Cody scans his prints, "Yes, tiny front door. Now the cave." Gingerly he approachs, "Smells bad!"
Bats flash—thousands. The rabbits laugh.
(139 characters)
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Picture from Susan's blog, Stony River,
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Labels: Humor(?), microfiction Monday, Story
posted by Jim @ 8/02/2010 12:03:00 AM
18 comments
18 Comments:
What a fun take on the pic for the day, Jim! Great giggle to wind down my day! Have a great week!
Sylvia
Some messy hobbits
nice take on the pic
you can hear the echos
Hmm. White Rabbit, right?
SparkleFarkle~~~~~*
That sounds like the hangover from the Mad Hatter's tea party. Nice one.
Smelly bats! LOL. Love the way the way the last line makes you wonder what is going on.
Rabbits, you can't live with em, you can't live without em. My 140 is here
'Look where you're going' is advice too late for this man! LOL!
I love the fact that this doesn't make it clear whether Cody's prints are "photographic" or "hoof"!
Nice story.
good one
I might have to come back to this one after a nice glass of wine. Too much logic is getting in the way of my thinking!
Now all you need is a racoon to offer to serve up some tea!
wow,
bats, cave, smells.
what a vivid 140,
it reminds me of Harry Potter...
You never know what you'll find at home in a place like that. :O
Oh those naughty rabbits. I like this!
You have a great imagination, Jim.
I think I smell a wabbit! (Courtesy of Elmer Fudd!) Love your post. Great job on this week's picture.
I wonder if Alice put the Rabbits up to it. Great take on the picture.
I love those old places...and your writing ...so fun Jim...!
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