Monday, August 02, 2010


Cody scans his prints, "Yes, tiny front door. Now the cave." Gingerly he approachs, "Smells bad!"
Bats flash—thousands. The rabbits laugh.


(139 characters)

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Picture from Susan's blog, Stony River,

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18 Comments:

At Sunday, August 01, 2010 11:37:00 PM, Blogger Sylvia K said...

What a fun take on the pic for the day, Jim! Great giggle to wind down my day! Have a great week!

Sylvia

 
At Sunday, August 01, 2010 11:59:00 PM, Blogger moondustwriter said...

Some messy hobbits

nice take on the pic

you can hear the echos

 
At Monday, August 02, 2010 3:00:00 AM, Blogger SparkleFarkle said...

Hmm. White Rabbit, right?

SparkleFarkle~~~~~*

 
At Monday, August 02, 2010 3:11:00 AM, Blogger anthonynorth said...

That sounds like the hangover from the Mad Hatter's tea party. Nice one.

 
At Monday, August 02, 2010 3:44:00 AM, Blogger Ellie said...

Smelly bats! LOL. Love the way the way the last line makes you wonder what is going on.

 
At Monday, August 02, 2010 4:15:00 AM, Blogger John's comments said...

Rabbits, you can't live with em, you can't live without em. My 140 is here

 
At Monday, August 02, 2010 5:29:00 AM, Blogger jabblog said...

'Look where you're going' is advice too late for this man! LOL!

 
At Monday, August 02, 2010 5:57:00 AM, Blogger MorningAJ said...

I love the fact that this doesn't make it clear whether Cody's prints are "photographic" or "hoof"!

Nice story.

 
At Monday, August 02, 2010 6:23:00 AM, Blogger swputh said...

good one

 
At Monday, August 02, 2010 11:41:00 AM, Blogger Mama Badger said...

I might have to come back to this one after a nice glass of wine. Too much logic is getting in the way of my thinking!

 
At Monday, August 02, 2010 2:18:00 PM, Anonymous K said...

Now all you need is a racoon to offer to serve up some tea!

 
At Monday, August 02, 2010 3:17:00 PM, Blogger Jingle said...

wow,
bats, cave, smells.
what a vivid 140,
it reminds me of Harry Potter...

 
At Monday, August 02, 2010 7:19:00 PM, Blogger hope said...

You never know what you'll find at home in a place like that. :O

 
At Monday, August 02, 2010 7:52:00 PM, Blogger Susan at Stony River said...

Oh those naughty rabbits. I like this!

 
At Tuesday, August 03, 2010 2:55:00 PM, Blogger EG Wow said...

You have a great imagination, Jim.

 
At Tuesday, August 03, 2010 3:01:00 PM, Blogger Sylvia Morice said...

I think I smell a wabbit! (Courtesy of Elmer Fudd!) Love your post. Great job on this week's picture.

 
At Wednesday, August 04, 2010 9:47:00 AM, Blogger Bill ~ {The Old Fart} said...

I wonder if Alice put the Rabbits up to it. Great take on the picture.

 
At Saturday, August 07, 2010 9:19:00 AM, Blogger Sandra (if) said...

I love those old places...and your writing ...so fun Jim...!

 

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