One Single Impression: Angel
My angel waits above my head in bay
I know she does, she's my protective marm
I pray to God I need her watching way
like moms of old she saves me from all harm
My angel lives with me she is my spouse
Pretty for me and queen of mine so sweet
I love her all, hands to feet, heart and soul
the greatest gal that I could ever meet
My angel lives with me my little child
This kid is smart and quick she's always near
she follows me around puppy dog style
I love my angel small this little dear
So now you know exactly what it takes
my angel list is short but hard to make
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I'm back and should be reading your poems and returning your comments. My other blog is in slow motion (link) but I will try to practice blogging etiquite here. I have a lot to do catching up for the holiday time off.
Mrs. Jim is still in London with Karen and KP until August 4 doing Granny Nanny duty.
Prompt word, Angel was suggested by Meduri at The Land of Dreams...!!!
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Labels: Loose Rhyme, One Single Impression, One-Single-Impression, Poem, Rhyme, Sonnet
posted by Jim @ 7/25/2010 12:03:00 AM
16 comments
16 Comments:
Please remember that when I write it isn't ALL me talking in the present. It is my poet, who may write from my past memories, fantasies, desires, etc.
The poet here has a little one living with him/her but my children are all grown and gone. And my grandchildren are either grown or are living with their parents. Thank God for that.
You could be this person; you may have these three angels. Or have had them.
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Great, angels, lovely angels...your poem is great, I ma touched, don't know what else to say, but not everyone in life have their lucky angels...
hi Jim.. yes, a lovely work of art, this poem...
three angels indeed.. i've 3 too :) mom, sis and one that watches me from above!
like the poem a lot.
i remember you contributing at Haiku Bones a few times :) do drop by at Haiku Heights too :) i'm trying to pick up where they left off..
Oh Jim!
I have I have three angles too. Two can be seen on my blog on page 'Fruits'
Third one like you said above me.
A beautiful poem.
Wow...a beautiful tribute to all your angels in life...:-)
Hmmmm...they maybe my angels too...are angels all female? I wish a male angel also???
Lovely take Jim! Loved it!
You can't get better angels than those.
Jim, I think you stayed up later than me last night. I really enjoyed your poem. It aptly describes the blessing we have in our lives with our angels. How blessed can we be? Thank you for brightening my morning.
I loved all the angels..
angular angels
Also don't forget to get aboard the Poetry Train on Monday mornings!
Oh....how sweet Jim! To be blessed with all your angels indeed! YOU are a lucky man! And welcome home!
it is so true and sweet...!
Very loving and beautiful poem, Jim. Thanks.
How sweet this is! Love the angels and the goodness they shower on you!
Angelic is in the air!:D Wonderful poem and three beautiful and lovely angels=P, Thank for sharing this:D
Ooh! Wonderful poem, Jim.
My inner poet writes from distant futures. Paradoxes -- all that could be, would be, and might be. :)
love your angel,
beautiful job!
Hi Jim,
This is a beautiful poem. You must have some lovely angels in your life. Thanks for sharing this. Sorry I'm a bit late reading your poem. Take care.
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