One Single Impression: Overt
.............Bright............and............Dismall............
Brothers: Overt and Covert
Once there were two brothers of Wright
they were different as night and day
Fred was always dapper and bright
Ted was quiet, loved wearing grey
Fred was open, always forthright
ask him he'd tell your answer plain
but Ted talked in riddles not right
kept his thoughts inside how insane
Died years ago now with the ants
shared their tombstone aptly inscribed
Fred--open frank and apparent
Ted--hidden secret and disguised
Depends on how you write your book
do you want your friend's second look
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© 2010 Jimmiehov
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Once there were two brothers of Wright
they were different as night and day
Fred was always dapper and bright
Ted was quiet, loved wearing grey
Fred was open, always forthright
ask him he'd tell your answer plain
but Ted talked in riddles not right
kept his thoughts inside how insane
Died years ago now with the ants
shared their tombstone aptly inscribed
Fred--open frank and apparent
Ted--hidden secret and disguised
Depends on how you write your book
do you want your friend's second look
Photos and Poem Copyright
© 2010 Jimmiehov
All Rights Reserved
I will try to read your poems and return your comments. If I don't, please forgive me. Mrs. Jim and I are still on holiday. Now we are in London visiting Karen, Billy, and KP who have moved here.
Prompt word, Overt, suggested by Gautami at Rooted
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Labels: One Single Impression, One-Single-Impression, Poem, Rhyme, Sonnet
posted by Jim @ 7/15/2010 03:20:00 AM
7 comments
7 Comments:
Good one Jim! I liked it- shows how 2 sibings can be so very different; and I sure get that with my sister. And thanks for the comment and invitation. You just never know... lol!! Have a great day!
I love these two characters. I think I am a little bit of both. Your rhyme scheme made it especially fun and playful to read aloud.
THANK YOU!
My Overt Poem may be read here.
I enjoyed this - gives a clear picture of the difference between the overt/covert and it's written in a clever fashion!
Another good poem. Hey, enjoy yourselves, and take lots of photo!
such a wonderful take on this prompt, so fun. Thank you Jim.
Hi Jim,
Your poem has me smiling this afternoon. Living in the Dayton area, I have an appreciation for the Wright Brothers for sure. My best, Rob.
interesting story written in a poem Jim...:-)
cute and i could only smile...and yes, sometimes I am a like Fred and at times like Ted...:-)
Thanks for coming up with a beautiful take on last Sunday's prompt...I thought you will be absent again like last week?
have a great weekend Jim!
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