One Single Impression: Pensive
Antique
jewelery expensive
dear aunt deceased-could it be
come to me I pray
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© 2010 Jimmiehov
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Photo credit below*
Prompt word, Pensive, suggested by Theodora D. Dinkwell at The Odd Inkwell
Find more poems at One Single Impression using "Pensive" as prompt
* Picture courtesy of IBS Pro! June 25, 2009, post titled Antique Jewelry, an ABC Guide (link) (containing an invitation to "Share and Enjoy" [Picture link])
I covet your comments, please. Once again I preparing to travel on holiday. Will it never end? My returning your comments may be 'splotchy.' I promise to take pictures!
Labels: One Single Impression, One-Single-Impression, prose poem, Senryū
posted by Jim @ 8/22/2010 12:03:00 AM
24 comments
24 Comments:
Beautiful photo!
May your prayers come true..
a trophy
Clever haiku. I liked it.
very nice, Jim.. lovely haiku..
Hi Jim,
great senryu!
They got it right, Theodora, Stacey, inkwell whispers, the odd inkwell.... we are all one in the same. ;)
The odd inkwell and Theodora are for my cooler, edgier poet fans.
Learning haiku now, that is cool. Like your writing, thanks for your advice. Wish you have a wonderful holiday.
Are you asking for a ghosty visit?
That's quite the fancy jewelry, Jim. Is this the prelude to a seance?
honest thought!
Jim, it makes one wonder who has the better riches ...the one who passes on or the one who remains with worldly goods...enjoyed the thoughts you sent my way:)
Ah, but would you rather have no treasures, and the aunt still alive?
Love the last line - very pensive indeed.
You have me thinking about how our things outlast us on this earth; I suppose their greatest value is as reminders of love.
The memory is the real treasure.
U r honest here Jim.
Enjoyed Haiku.
Enjoy your travel & holidays.
Yes, with such lovely wealth.. one is tempted to pray..and does discover the lost ones.. Beautiful.. I will call it Haiku.. we are talking of nature.. human nature..
Visit me for my 100th.. blessings awaited..
I love this photo Jim, nice work!
Pensive and wishful, too! Clever, as well...
Hi Jim,
Your poem certainly evokes the mood of being pensive. I enjoyed your O.S.I. poem. Nicely done.
all i could think of was antique roadshow....... have a great tripp!!
Hi Jim;
This is a clever take Jim! loved it!
I am late, actually I am on leave from blogworld! Having and R & R with my hubby and kids for a couple of weeks!
See you in my blog too! :)
Excellent haiku^^ Thank for sharing=P
Oh Jim, this is lovely. I really liked your picture. That and your wonderful words paint your thoughts so well. Love it.
Took me this long to find out how to post my poem. I am such a dummy.
Thanks my dear friend for a great read.
Melanie
Very clever how you left the inheritance ambiguous. What jewels does that chest hold?
Wishing you a wonderful vacation!
Oh how I love "antique" things...wishing you a lovely inheritance of whatever you are hoping... and Happy Travels once more! How nice you can do that! Take care~
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