Sunday, August 29, 2010

One Single Impression: Empty



Friend

Merlot is my comfort
I shall not want
Though I am old and blue
There when I need


My glass is near empty
I shall not want
For sure there is some more
Where that came from


My thoughts once bad dissolve
Night's fright is calmed
A friend may come to call
None ever writes


And if our bottle's dry
We shall not want
For sure there are some more
Where this came from






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Prompt word, Empty, suggested by Snow White at Mirror Of Thoughts
Find more poems at
One Single Impression using "Empty" as prompt

I am still on the road (first Quebec City, Canada, now Montreal) doing holiday time. I won't have much time to answer your comments until later this week but I do really appreciate them and in knowing you came.

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12 Comments:

At Sunday, August 29, 2010 2:39:00 AM, Blogger anthonynorth said...

I love the way you use the bottle to represent your meaning in this.

 
At Sunday, August 29, 2010 7:20:00 AM, Blogger Nessa said...

A Merlot can be a good friend (for a little while anyway.)

 
At Sunday, August 29, 2010 7:51:00 AM, Blogger Ramesh Sood said...

Well away from bottles.. I like the way you open up the bottle of your feelings.. they just flow.. well done.. Jim..will wait for your visit..

 
At Sunday, August 29, 2010 9:22:00 AM, Blogger Leo said...

ah.. for certain there is more where that came from..! :)

 
At Sunday, August 29, 2010 11:18:00 AM, Blogger Sandra.if said...

I love Merlot!

 
At Sunday, August 29, 2010 8:46:00 PM, Blogger The Write Girl said...

I like this clever and fun poem...your style reminds me of a proverb or spiritual verse.

 
At Monday, August 30, 2010 12:58:00 AM, Blogger Tammie Lee said...

I love your take on this. I love merlot too. Thanks for the chuckle.

 
At Monday, August 30, 2010 3:25:00 PM, Blogger Tumblewords: said...

Oh, for sure - there is!

 
At Tuesday, August 31, 2010 12:03:00 PM, Anonymous ms pie said...

hi jim, a most enjoyable ditty... merlot is a good red wine to be sure.... sounds like yr havin a lovely time... always wanted to go to quebec....

 
At Wednesday, September 01, 2010 2:39:00 AM, Blogger Amity said...

Hi Jim;

This is some quite good empty poem! Not really so empty Jim, there are still a lot of it as you said so!

Very nice take as always! :)

Btw, i have an award for you in my blog, pls check! :)

 
At Wednesday, September 01, 2010 3:00:00 PM, Blogger Geraldine said...

this is great Jim, very original!

 
At Saturday, September 04, 2010 7:41:00 AM, Blogger Patti said...

Love a good bottle (er I mean glass) of wine! Loved the analogies here. Hope your travels are going well~ Enjoy!

 

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