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Of the Nagging Woman;
fill in the blanks with your own words
I.
She's (besides being _____ )
She's Loud
and Disappointing,
Arrogant
It's Demoralizing
the way she Barks
So Disgustingly irritating
Spews Hateful remarks,
they are so Very grating
II.
How I feel (like _____ )
I might be Insufficient
but for sure I'm terribly Disappointed
Often I would like to be Hatefully retorting
I'm Demoralized
and painfully Hurt,
wishing I was Running away
I feel like Dirt
she treats me like that. I could go Faraway
III.
What to do (besides _____ )
Sometimes I Cry
almost drives me to Drink
wish I could Muffle
her and Disappear
while she gets loose. I like to Kick
but I'll settle on going to the Golf course
It makes me to Be sick
You might think we need to Divorce
_ _ _ _
- Photo and Poem Copyright, Jimmiehov 2011 and 2018, All Rights Reserved
I am not sure everyone will call this work tonight a poem, it got late as I've had a busy Sunday, I'm sorry. For sure it is a list of words or phrases. I did in my mind have something much better planned. I think it may fit the requirements of both the groups above.
That said, Sanaa want us to try a new form, the A L' Arora.
- Hers ideally would have four verses but she said that two or three would do.
- The second is modeled after Shelly's defence described in the NaPoWriMo instructions. Mine is very abbreviated though.
- I believe it also loosely fits the requirement of a "triptych form poem," also very abbreviated (Google links for you to read up on it).
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Labels: Flirty Guy, Humor(?), NaPoWriMo 2018, Poem, Poem forms, Real Toads