Should I have stayed? -- a Quadrille poem for the dVerse prompt "Fold"
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| [Writer's "Flirty Guy"] |
Love's Corner
Our paths we cross
At Love's Corner
She smiles at
me
Mine's bit
warmer
Followed by
my wink
She turns her
head
As if I stink
Making me
think
My love for
her
Would be one
way
I'll fold my
tent
And fade
away
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- Photo and Poem Copyright, Jimmiehov 2010 and 2023 respectively, All Rights Reserved
- I first started using the "Flirty Guy" with my love stories and poems in probably the year 2010, you might read it here. My label, "Flirty Guy", at the bottom here will brink you quite a few more.
- I am linked with De Jackson of Friday Writings dVerse Quadrille #186 at
- Quadrilles,have Exactly 44 words, which this one has, today's is to use the word, "Fold"
- Click here to read other's Quadrille poems writings
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Labels: dVerse prompt, Flirty Guy, Love Story, Poem
posted by Jim @ 10/16/2023 03:50:00 PM
8 comments
8 Comments:
Awww. This makes me sad. Well spilled.
de
"You gotta know when to hold em and when to fold em!" You probably did the right thing. Well done.
Sorry the two are a mismatch. It's a wonder anyone can find a lifelong partner.
Indeed. Love the double entendre ending (or was it just me).
Fading away is indeed sad ... however, I enjoyed the lighthearted way you composed this quadrille.
Sad when it only goes one way
Too bad, but I suppose it was not meant to be.
Cute but sad, Jim...
Much love,
David
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