- Rommy has invited us to use ‘pivot’ (or any variation of the word) in our poetry or prose. Pivot: NOUN -- the central point, pin, or shaft on which a mechanism turns or oscillates. central shaft fulcrumaxis axleswivelpinhub To see, read, other "spinning" writes I have posted go to the link below:
Ceiling Pivot; Palace Prison
Perched way up high
It's hot up here
Ceiling fan my perch
Can't scratch my nose
Sleeping most times
Sans sleeping pills
Hide from the light
My eyes are trained
Turned on at dusk
Spot intruders
'til comes midnight
They'd best not stay
When nights are hot
Might sweat a lot
Ceiling fan goes on
Blades pivoting
Cools the air
I hang on tight
Turns round and round
Blades turning fast
Hanging on tight
Don't dare get down
Don't want to fall
No one to catch
Spin 'round the light
Until it stops
Note: This is a four-verse, four-syllable-per-line write. You can read four ways, down each column separately as single writes, down one way followed by down the second, or across the page, not minding the gap.
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Here we have a view of a ceiling in a bedroom.
This was while we toured the Royal Yacht Britannia during our visit to Edinburgh, Scotland.
While there we found this pretty stuffed bear riding on top of a ceiling fan in one of the bedrooms.
We have no explanation for why it was there.
Outside there were a few clouds, see the pictures at the bottom. Our daughter below, KP, was with us for this overseas visit.
I have previously posted the items below the Note and the Ceiling Fan above on Friday 17, 2008, when I participated in the Sky Watch activity. That group is still going except I would get sooo many comments that I could not afford the time taken to answer on the other's posts.
- Poem Copyrite, Jimmiehov 2023, All Rights Reserved
- I am linked with Rommy (see her above directions) at the Friday Writings at
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Labels: Artistic Interpretations, Friday Writings, Poem, Skywatch, Story Poem, Syllabic Form, Travel
7 Comments:
Maybe some kid left him there.
I thought of two ways to read your poem, but not four until I read your notes. Very successfully done!
Oh wow, 4 ways!! I struggle to write one-way poems! The yacht sounds lovely... and Edinburgh is so worth a visit!
A quadruple yummy writing treat ... dizzy when I try to read it too fast. LOL
Ha ha! I love that unlikely spot for a bear. It's hot up here! Sometimes we just accept our circumstances and try to make the best of them.
What a playful piece! LOL, seeing the bear there would have made me smile.
Its like a crossword puzzle
I love the bear in the ceiling fan!
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