Thursday, January 26, 2023

Two Fish Stories --- a Memento Form Poem for the dVerse write


   Fish Stories Two; a 
    memento form poem write

Keep fish on my wall to remind 
Hatchery Missouri 
No bites 
Grandma's trip for us stays in mind 
Friend came along for me 
Pool side 

Girlfriend, we fished her father's pit  
Little brother along 
Bait his 
We caught no fish her brother did 
All day off brother's hook 
Re-bait 
 - - - 

 - Photo and Poem Copyright, Jimmiehov 2023, All Rights Reserved 
 - I am linked with Grace at dVerse Meeting the Bar:  Memento at 
  - These both are True, we could catch NO Fish while we were there, it was bait brother's hook, take off fish, bait brothers hook, take off fish, etc.

For the Memento Form use:
    8 beats for line one; 
    6 beats for line two; and 
    two beats for line three.
    8 beats for line one; 
    6 beats for line two; and 
    two beats for line three. 
Rhyme use: a/b/c/a/b/c
This is repeated twice for two stanzas.
 
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6 Comments:

At Friday, January 27, 2023 1:40:00 AM, Blogger Mrityunjay Dixit said...

Love its simplicity, Jim. Nice stories.

 
At Friday, January 27, 2023 5:25:00 AM, Anonymous ben Alexander said...

I like how you played around with the rhyme in that second stanza, Jim!

~David
SkepticsKaddish.com

 
At Friday, January 27, 2023 9:39:00 AM, Blogger dwru27 said...

I wonder what you were doing while little brother was caching all the fish! :>) Great poem. Love the story behind it.

 
At Saturday, January 28, 2023 10:31:00 AM, Blogger Merril D. Smith said...

It sounds like some fun memories. 🙂

 
At Sunday, January 29, 2023 7:38:00 AM, Blogger Grace said...

I love these stories. Thanks for joining in.

 
At Sunday, January 29, 2023 9:22:00 AM, Blogger brudberg said...

It's not easy to catch, but maybe it's not the reason to fish

 

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