Two Fish Stories --- a Memento Form Poem for the dVerse write
Fish Stories Two; a
memento form poem write
Keep fish on my wall to remind
Hatchery Missouri
No bites
Grandma's trip for us stays in mind
Friend came along for me
Pool side
Girlfriend, we fished her father's pit
Little brother along
Bait his
We caught no fish her brother did
All day off brother's hook
Re-bait
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- Photo and Poem Copyright, Jimmiehov 2023, All Rights Reserved
- I am linked with Grace at dVerse Meeting the Bar: Memento at
- These both are True, we could catch NO Fish while we were there, it was bait brother's hook, take off fish, bait brothers hook, take off fish, etc.
For the Memento Form use:
8 beats for line one;
6 beats for line two; and
two beats for line three.
8 beats for line one;
6 beats for line two; and
two beats for line three.
Rhyme use: a/b/c/a/b/c
This is repeated twice for two stanzas.
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6 Comments:
Love its simplicity, Jim. Nice stories.
I like how you played around with the rhyme in that second stanza, Jim!
~David
SkepticsKaddish.com
I wonder what you were doing while little brother was caching all the fish! :>) Great poem. Love the story behind it.
It sounds like some fun memories. 🙂
I love these stories. Thanks for joining in.
It's not easy to catch, but maybe it's not the reason to fish
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