A Piggyback Poem for Thursday
"A Hurry of Hoofs;"*
on a Mare named Knight
"Under the night sky she
mounted a mare and rode" *
The moon shone brightly
and though her hair was shining
It could not compete
with her bold steed's flaring mane
Sparking seemed to burn
Brighter than the hottest fire
Dragons and other
frothing monsters passed her by
Belching and hissing
holding tight they reached her not
Nor was she afraid
frothing wolves wild growling bears
"A hurry of hoofs" *
Speeding on, her Mare named Knight
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- Photo and Poem Copyright, Jimmiehov 2008 and 2018, All Rights Reserved
(my 2008 dog photo blog post link, http://jimmiehov.blogspot.com/2008/07/how-about-driving-900-miles-to-meet.html )
- I'm linked with Sherry Blue Sky in the Imaginary Garden at http://withrealtoads.blogspot.com/2018/08/wordy-thursday-with-wild-woman.html?m=1
* - For Sherry we are writing a "Piggyback Poem" which begins with a line from one poem and ends with a line from another. My first is from "The Horses, the Sorrow, the Umbilicus" by Maureen Hynes at Sherry's link above. The last in part is a line from "Paul Revere's Ride" by Wadsworth ( https://m.poets.org/poetsorg/poem/paul-reveres-ride ).
Labels: Personal-Challenge-2018, Poem, Poem forms, Real Toads
8 Comments:
Jim, this is my new favourite of yours. I love this wild midnight ride, the dragons, wolves and bears. How wonderful!
Love all the imagery!
This is most imaginative of you! I like it.
Ooh, such a fantasy-filled ride. Knight, being the name, adds into the adventure. Lovely!
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a lovely ride into the fantastical ... with no fear ... ah, to ride in the moonlight, burning white light for fire ... lovely little trip you've taken us on Jim :)
Quite an menagerie of beasts to watch her or go past her! Probably something I would have wished for too more than seventy years ago in my dreams.
Love this mythical magical place you've taken us to!
New at Toads.....having come by way of dVerse folks, enjoying this prompt and the diverse responses to it!
I've only just got round to reading this poem, Jim, and I agree with Sherry. I especially enjoyed the action and sounds in:
'Dragons and other
frothing monsters passed her by
Belching and hissing'.
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