Saturday, July 14, 2018

A Tricube Poem ~~ Hearts pitty-patty

First grade love

I love you
Without fail
Whole bunches

Really do
Tarts in pail
Share lunches

Me 'n you
Set our sail
Trust hunches
 _ _ _ _

 - Poem Copyright,  Jimmiehov 20i8, All Rights Reserved
 - I'm linked with Marian in the Imaginary Garden at http://withrealtoads.blogspot.com/2018/07/fussy-little-forms-tricube.html?m=1
 - Check the link above to learn of the tricube poem. It's three verses of three lines of three syllables each.
 - Believe it, I had a first grade crush. How about you?

12 Comments:

At Saturday, July 14, 2018 6:25:00 PM, Blogger willow_switches: Pat๐Ÿƒ said...

oh well done - this is great - good use of this simple form, and yeah, holy smokes, this captures the innocence and essence of "first (grade) love" - especially if of a certain generation - I'm totally tripping on the line " tarts in pail" ... this is conjuring!

 
At Saturday, July 14, 2018 6:48:00 PM, Blogger Rosemary Nissen-Wade said...

Oh, cute, sweet - and what delightful rhyming.

 
At Saturday, July 14, 2018 8:53:00 PM, Blogger Helen said...

Love this one, Jim.

 
At Sunday, July 15, 2018 12:45:00 AM, Blogger Kerry O'Connor said...

That hunches.. that's great. I like the way you used rhymes too.

 
At Sunday, July 15, 2018 4:52:00 AM, Blogger Sanaa Rizvi said...

This is soo sweet!๐Ÿ’– Lovely write.

 
At Sunday, July 15, 2018 6:47:00 AM, Blogger annell said...

TC!! Too cute!! Jim you are such a romantic.

 
At Sunday, July 15, 2018 9:15:00 AM, Blogger Marian said...

This is great. I think of: "Will you go with me? Circle yes or no" :)

 
At Sunday, July 15, 2018 10:29:00 AM, Blogger Vandana Sharma said...

Cute , sweet love!!

 
At Sunday, July 15, 2018 11:10:00 AM, Blogger hyperCRYPTICal said...

Lovely Jim - you romantic you!
Anna :o]

 
At Sunday, July 15, 2018 6:38:00 PM, Blogger Susie Clevenger said...

This is so cute.

 
At Monday, July 16, 2018 8:13:00 AM, Blogger Jo Aylard said...

Sweet!

 
At Monday, July 16, 2018 6:55:00 PM, Blogger Sara McNulty said...

This is sweet, and the sound of it is authentic. Love the second one!

 

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