Sunday, June 07, 2009

One Single Impression: Intersections




Intersections (a ditty)

roads must cross and roads must meet
he'll meet you at the corner
please don't be so very cross

but the corner doesn't count
for some--not past two or ten
no intersection found then

souls must cross and they will meet
his vocabulary's small
why he says crossroads to all

words can cross and they will meet
three or four or five or six
crossword letters intersect

- - - - - - - - - - -

intersection's here
now you look to left and right
oops missed the red light

Copyright © 2009 Jimmiehov. All Rights Reserved


Find more poems at One Single Impression
"Intersections" as prompt,
suggested by H.T. of
Haiku Tuna

Painting is easy when you don’t know how, but very difficult when you do. Edgar Dégas
The same may go for poetry? (whatever, I enjoy painting with the words!)

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19 Comments:

At Sunday, June 07, 2009 12:00:00 AM, Anonymous gautami tripathy said...

corner doesn't count for some..

Wonderful.

In the third stanza

if you put "his vocabulary is small",
it would read better.

But it is your call...

strings cross with wires

 
At Sunday, June 07, 2009 12:56:00 AM, Blogger spacedlaw said...

Fun poem! A great find to read early morning. Thanks.

 
At Sunday, June 07, 2009 2:42:00 AM, Blogger anthonynorth said...

That was fun, rounded off with a great line.

 
At Sunday, June 07, 2009 4:09:00 AM, OpenID barbaragretter said...

This was fun, Jim! Except why is it that I always seem to miss the light? hahaha!

 
At Sunday, June 07, 2009 5:23:00 AM, Blogger SandyCarlson said...

This was fun, Jim. I like the puzzle image.

 
At Sunday, June 07, 2009 9:22:00 AM, Blogger Beth P. said...

'oops' indeed!
Clever li'l piece here, Jim.

Thanks for your 'Hotel California' comment. I hope that my friend 'A' doesn't feel as much a hostage as I've always felt in that song!

Have a great week--

 
At Sunday, June 07, 2009 9:36:00 AM, Blogger Tammie Lee said...

Thank you for my morning chuckle, oops indeed.

I enjoy this line: souls must cross and they will meet

nice thing to count on~

 
At Sunday, June 07, 2009 9:45:00 AM, Blogger Maggie said...

One can truely have problems when they do not see the red light at the cross roads.

Thankfully it does not always result in death.

 
At Sunday, June 07, 2009 5:54:00 PM, Blogger floreta said...

i remember this photo and i still love it! i like how you depict crossroads and crossing souls!

 
At Sunday, June 07, 2009 11:03:00 PM, Blogger Jeeves said...

Fun poem..

 
At Monday, June 08, 2009 1:44:00 AM, Blogger DeLi said...

the pictures lead me to some flashbacks...good, old, happy days

and the words, as always are witty

 
At Monday, June 08, 2009 11:21:00 AM, Blogger if said...

I like your poem...!

 
At Monday, June 08, 2009 1:20:00 PM, Blogger Tumblewords: said...

Love these intersections!

 
At Monday, June 08, 2009 2:15:00 PM, Blogger Sue said...

and a clever little ditty it is too! I like the repetition and the rhythm of this.

 
At Tuesday, June 09, 2009 4:49:00 AM, Anonymous Lynne said...

Hi Jim,
Enjoyed this poem and was surprised and like the end! I like the play on words especially the different meanings and permutations of "cross." (I enjoy crossword puzzles and often hit a "red light" trying to figure out an answer.)

Oh, I"ve been out of blogland,for the past few months, for the most part, and have returned with a new blog and new name. I used to be "Gel." I have commented on some common blogs once in a while and seen your comments like on "Beloved Dreamer"'s exquisite poetry blog, but my computer exploded and I've not had internet. Hope all is well with you, Mrs. Jim and yours!

 
At Tuesday, June 09, 2009 11:01:00 AM, Blogger Beloved Haiku Dreams said...

Jim, this is great. How very clever you are. I love it.
As you may have noticed my BD web blog is gone. While I was in hospital it came under attack and was removed. I lost all of my work.
My new site is :
http://belovedhaikudreams.blogspot.com
My email is the same.
Glad to be back among the living

love, Melanie-bd

 
At Tuesday, June 09, 2009 11:12:00 AM, Blogger Geraldine said...

Well done Jim! Thanks for this inspiring and uplifting take on this great prompt.

 
At Wednesday, June 10, 2009 3:50:00 PM, Blogger Patti said...

Yup- I enjoyed it! Always clever with words and great picture!

 
At Thursday, June 11, 2009 2:59:00 PM, Anonymous one more believer said...

ah very clever jim... and excellent ditty!!! ..oh, blue monday is fab... love the color blue...

 

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