Sunday, May 03, 2009

One Single Impression: Tactile


.......T A C T I L E
Touch tenderly tonight
And make it be alright
Cuddle softly snuggle
Touching smoothly fondle
Inner throbs and pulses
Loving warm white juices
Eat--nuzzle soft mama



Copyright © 2009 Jimmiehov. All Rights Reserved


Find more poems at One Single Impression
"Tactile" as prompt,
requested by Heather of
A Slow Road
.
Painting is easy when you don’t know how, but very difficult when you do. Edgar Dégas
The same may go for poetry? (whatever, I enjoy painting with the words!)
[This OSI is a little rough. Sorry, I had the idea but ran out of time.]
Leave me a comment please!!

I will read your OSI by the end of
the week after I get back from France.

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23 Comments:

At Saturday, May 02, 2009 5:04:00 PM, Blogger SandyCarlson said...

Beautiful, tender, sensuous, Jim. Thanks.

 
At Saturday, May 02, 2009 10:26:00 PM, Blogger Rachel said...

Good poem Jim and the picture is so cute of the bears!

Hope you and A. are having a blast!!!

 
At Sunday, May 03, 2009 2:31:00 AM, Blogger Amias said...

Jim you know this poem does double duty ... On one hand it's sensual,and on the other hand ... it mother and child ... and wow, you acroticized it! Your creative juices are flowing.

 
At Sunday, May 03, 2009 3:25:00 AM, Blogger anthonynorth said...

This one speaks on many levels. Clever and lovely.

 
At Sunday, May 03, 2009 4:00:00 AM, Blogger spacedlaw said...

Cute poem and a visual treat too.

 
At Sunday, May 03, 2009 7:55:00 AM, Blogger Sue said...

I like that the poem leads you in one direction then surprises you with a shift. The bears in the window are divine, makes the viewer feel all warm and cuddly too.

 
At Sunday, May 03, 2009 11:08:00 AM, Blogger Maggie said...

Jim,
You never fail to amaze me.

This was a beautiful and touching acrostic tale told in poetic form.

I loved it.

 
At Sunday, May 03, 2009 4:38:00 PM, Blogger Quiet Paths said...

Very very sweet. You are in France?? I hope it is amazing.

 
At Sunday, May 03, 2009 4:38:00 PM, Blogger Quiet Paths said...

PS: totally loved your interp of my poem this week.

 
At Sunday, May 03, 2009 7:05:00 PM, Anonymous felisol said...

Dear Jim,
you know how to paint with word.
Love your poem.

Glad your son is a better poker player than you are.
He did not bluff!!
I'm glad on your behalf.
From Felisol

 
At Sunday, May 03, 2009 9:37:00 PM, Blogger david mcmahon said...

Perfect image of the mother and baby bear, Jim.

 
At Monday, May 04, 2009 7:15:00 AM, OpenID barb said...

Your acrostic makes me feel all warm and fuzzy, Jim! Beautiful.

 
At Monday, May 04, 2009 11:48:00 AM, Blogger Beloved Dreamer said...

Jim my friend. This is so loving and sensuous. Hope you are have a great time.



love, Melanie-bd

 
At Monday, May 04, 2009 12:00:00 PM, Blogger Tumblewords: said...

Ah, this is wonderfully well done!

 
At Monday, May 04, 2009 12:15:00 PM, Blogger Geraldine said...

Lovely words Jim. Well done with this prompt. Great photo choice too!

 
At Monday, May 04, 2009 5:18:00 PM, Anonymous Kilauea Poetry said...

Mother & babe..makes the world go round..this is touching Jim-

 
At Tuesday, May 05, 2009 12:05:00 AM, Blogger Jeeves said...

Wow!!!So tender

 
At Tuesday, May 05, 2009 9:00:00 AM, Blogger Beth P. said...

Jim--
I loved this!
Got my juices going...!
Have fun and a safe trip home--

 
At Tuesday, May 05, 2009 9:22:00 AM, Blogger qualcosa di bello said...

oh so sweet! i had the same connection amias notes in the comment...i thought both of my husband & my babies

 
At Wednesday, May 06, 2009 8:50:00 AM, Blogger audrey` said...

The picture is so cute.
The poem is so tender.

Thank you =)

 
At Wednesday, May 06, 2009 5:55:00 PM, Blogger Patois said...

This gives me such warm feelings. Very well done.

 
At Wednesday, May 06, 2009 10:44:00 PM, Blogger Fred said...

Well done, Jim!

 
At Thursday, May 07, 2009 7:45:00 AM, Blogger Patti said...

Excellent job Jim!!! very creatively put! Hope your travels are going well!

 

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