One Single Impression: Tactile
.......T A C T I L E
Touch tenderly tonight
And make it be alright
Cuddle softly snuggle
Touching smoothly fondle
Inner throbs and pulses
Loving warm white juices
Eat--nuzzle soft mama
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Painting is easy when you don’t know how, but very difficult when you do. Edgar Dégas
The same may go for poetry? (whatever, I enjoy painting with the words!)
[This OSI is a little rough. Sorry, I had the idea but ran out of time.]
Leave me a comment please!!
I will read your OSI by the end of
the week after I get back from France.
The same may go for poetry? (whatever, I enjoy painting with the words!)
[This OSI is a little rough. Sorry, I had the idea but ran out of time.]
Leave me a comment please!!
I will read your OSI by the end of
the week after I get back from France.
Labels: Acrostic, Animals, Awww...Mondays, One Single Impression, Poem, Store Windows, Syllabic Form
posted by Jim @ 5/03/2009 12:00:00 AM
22 comments
22 Comments:
Beautiful, tender, sensuous, Jim. Thanks.
Good poem Jim and the picture is so cute of the bears!
Hope you and A. are having a blast!!!
Jim you know this poem does double duty ... On one hand it's sensual,and on the other hand ... it mother and child ... and wow, you acroticized it! Your creative juices are flowing.
This one speaks on many levels. Clever and lovely.
Cute poem and a visual treat too.
I like that the poem leads you in one direction then surprises you with a shift. The bears in the window are divine, makes the viewer feel all warm and cuddly too.
Jim,
You never fail to amaze me.
This was a beautiful and touching acrostic tale told in poetic form.
I loved it.
Very very sweet. You are in France?? I hope it is amazing.
PS: totally loved your interp of my poem this week.
Dear Jim,
you know how to paint with word.
Love your poem.
Glad your son is a better poker player than you are.
He did not bluff!!
I'm glad on your behalf.
From Felisol
Perfect image of the mother and baby bear, Jim.
Your acrostic makes me feel all warm and fuzzy, Jim! Beautiful.
Jim my friend. This is so loving and sensuous. Hope you are have a great time.
love, Melanie-bd
Ah, this is wonderfully well done!
Lovely words Jim. Well done with this prompt. Great photo choice too!
Mother & babe..makes the world go round..this is touching Jim-
Wow!!!So tender
Jim--
I loved this!
Got my juices going...!
Have fun and a safe trip home--
oh so sweet! i had the same connection amias notes in the comment...i thought both of my husband & my babies
The picture is so cute.
The poem is so tender.
Thank you =)
This gives me such warm feelings. Very well done.
Excellent job Jim!!! very creatively put! Hope your travels are going well!
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