One Single Impression: Listening
L I S T E N I N G
I s not my
S weetheart's big
T hing at all
E ver since
N oah's sin
I could tell
N othing but —
G ossip flows
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Tag: One Single Impression Listening
Laurie of April Wine brought this week's prompt
Tag: Jim's OSI
Painting is easy when you don’t know how, but very difficult when you do. Edgar Dégas
The same may go for poetry? (whatever, I enjoy painting with the words!)
posted by Jim @ 4/05/2009 12:03:00 AM
23 comments
23 Comments:
You are going acrostic on me!
"Noah's sin" .. yes, I remember that, at least the one in the Bible. We are still gossiping about him.
Very Clever!-and funny too.
I enjoyed it.
you have made me chuckle....
Loved this! Good going!
:D
scotch-taped
A common problem, alas. Nice acrostiche.
Jokingly put, but so true :-)
Very fun to read.
Gentle touch of satire is quite refreshing!
Jim,
I can see you enjoyed playing with this prompt...you did it well.
there is truth in humor!
Made me laugh. Very clever indeed!
Gave me a big smile!
whoa! You are good! I hope you won't have to look over your shoulder now for the next week waiting for the shadow of Sweetie to fall. Thanks for the smile, Jim.
Very funny. These acrostics are really growing on me.
some humor in here! i'm actually not too great at listening too.. working on it. :)
All that talk! I try not listen to the noise but to hear the voice and learn the heart.
This is so good! And an acrostic, too. How cool is that?
gossip and listening is there anything inbetween??
This is good JIm, but I'll bet you didn't show it to Sweetheart!
Thank you all for the nice comments. I ran out of time, this was a little 'quickie' acrostic that was sitting--sans 'sweetheart'--in the back of my mind.
Thank you for your concerns as well, the 'sweetheart' referenced is NOT Mrs. Jim. No way.
I liked the flow using this word.
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Great job on the acrostic Jim! You alsways make me think and smile- thanks!
Please delete this if two of my comments show up! This was very clever and thought you did a great job Jim-
Women Do tend to be a little chatty AND a little catty! hahaha!
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