One Single Impression: Equals
Two. e q u a l s .a pair
Two pretty young maidens
With too much ale
Only one will prevail
Evenly divided
Quarrels aloof
Under the lights they're cool
All about turf
Into the ring they go
Showing their stuff
At the bell they do charge
Pray for souls please Mama
All is unfair
It stinks to high Heaven
Rigged this affaire
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Tag: One Single Impression Equals is this week' prompt
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Painting is easy when you don’t know how, but very difficult when you do. Edgar Dégas
The same may go for poetry? (whatever, I enjoy painting with the words!)
Labels: Acrostic, One Single Impression, Poem, Sports
posted by Jim @ 3/22/2009 12:03:00 AM
22 comments
22 Comments:
Yeah! I'm the first one here =)
Great poem, Dr Jim =)
This was very humorous-I enjoyed it.
This is fun.
Some great humour here. Loved them.
I don't recall you doing an acrostic poem before, Jim! Well done! :]
Ha! Jim you did it ... you did an acrostic!
I use to love wrestling until I found out most of it was fake. I wondered about the boxing, because my son just love it.
This made me smile .. thank you.
Love your wit!
Wow, Jim--
What' the rest of that story??!
Nice poem...
Hope you are well!
Jim,
I love your acrostic and the tale of the match made me smile.
a fairy tale...but how does this end??? wonderful intrigue, jim!
What fun! Great acrostic, btw...
This sounds like an exciting evening out! Well done Jim - and very clever; but no mud slinging?
Jim, in answer to your comment just now -- QCIslands: we have read the waters around that area are quite protected; we won’t be venturing out into open ocean -it is much like the Sunset Coast. Beginners apparently can kayak there - we will have a spray skirt on too.
I love what you did here, Jim.
fun, clever, and intriguing!
oh you make it so respectable... excellent form jim!
Two acrostics in a row. Both equally pleasing in diffrent ways. (I read Amias' before coming here.)
Good work Jim on getting down your interpretation into an acrostic! Your wit is great! You will have to finish the story you started about your daughter in my comments section. Have a good one!
What a good job!
This was interesting..I too wonder how it ended!
Thanks for stopping by-
Hi, Jim,
I like the poem.
It's so very you-ish.
From Felisol
Such a fun poem, and I like a story. I find acrostics difficult but very much liked yours!
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