Saturday, June 05, 2021

Sunday Muse -- Young Hearts Miss Out


 My Girl 

It was love at first sight 
The day I heard her play 
From an instrument brash 
Came sweet and mellow tones  

Smiling not, serious
She tamed her cello fine 
Sounding classics for her  
She knew not how I felt 

Dare not would I meet her 
My crush she never knew 
 _ _ _ 

 - Poem Copyright , Jimmiehov 2021, All Rights Reserved 
 - I am linked with Carrie Van Horn for inspiration from her Photo at the Sunday Muse #163,  http://thesundaymuse.blogspot.com/2021/06/sunday-muse-163.html?m=1 
 - THIS IS NOT JIM, he dreams and has had girl crushes not known

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13 Comments:

At Saturday, June 05, 2021 12:20:00 PM, Blogger robkistner said...

Falling in love with the music, drawn strongly to the musician — I certainly understand Jim.

 
At Saturday, June 05, 2021 2:22:00 PM, Blogger Carrie Van Horn said...

Truly lovely Jim! One of your finest!

 
At Saturday, June 05, 2021 7:36:00 PM, Blogger indybev said...

A secret crush! We all had at least one!

 
At Saturday, June 05, 2021 8:21:00 PM, Blogger qbit said...

All that listening to Bach Cello concertos so you would have something to talk to her about!

 
At Sunday, June 06, 2021 5:25:00 AM, Blogger Gillena Cox said...

Beautiful song of love Jim
Happy Sunday

Much💛love

 
At Sunday, June 06, 2021 6:47:00 AM, Blogger C. Sandlin said...

Perfectly captured!

 
At Sunday, June 06, 2021 10:55:00 AM, Blogger Helen said...

This is luscious, Jim .... as is the sound of the cello.

 
At Sunday, June 06, 2021 11:28:00 AM, Blogger Marion Horton said...

The silent admirer - poignantly portrayed.

 
At Sunday, June 06, 2021 3:41:00 PM, Blogger ms_lili said...

Sometimes all you can do is worship from afar. I'm glad her playing brought such joy to you. Maybe one day she will approach him and remove his doubts and fears. Good poem, Jim.
Li/Lisa@tao-talk

 
At Sunday, June 06, 2021 4:32:00 PM, Blogger Susie Clevenger said...

Oh crushes, they play us like sad songs at times, but oh the joy when we first feel them.

 
At Sunday, June 06, 2021 6:33:00 PM, Blogger kaykuala said...

Dare not would I meet her
My crush she never knew

Love the idea of admiration that is not verbalized. Sincerity can still be registered in one's mind. Great twist in your write, Jim!

Hank

 
At Monday, June 07, 2021 2:38:00 AM, Blogger Sunita said...

Music and romance...well said.

 
At Monday, June 07, 2021 7:44:00 AM, Blogger Soulfluff said...

Painting with a few words such a powerful image.

 

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