Unusual
I am an unusual man
I was an unusual boy
Unusual mark I carry
Wearing it high on my thigh
Or on my forehead Matters not
But wear it I must Dreaded mark
Passed on to me and family
I've passed it to kids Boys and girls
I am an unusual man
Man who has unusual dreams
I dream of leprechauns and oranges
My wife dreams of monkeys and bananas
The children dream of gorillas growling
and red lollipops made with lemon rhyme
Gorillas monkeys leprechauns three
Not uncommon They wear the dreaded mark
I am an unusual man
With unusual family
We drink peppermint Gator* Aide
and eat steak and raw potatoes
Chocolates at day tea bags at night
We sleep on cocklebur mattress
Silk sheets' torn edges cover us
Not uncommon These dreaded marks
I am an unusual man
Unusual habits and friends
Smile at strangers and scowl at friends
Jolly at morning Fight at night
We shower cold with Oxen Dolls
I chew my cud while milking cows
and spit it out all the next day
That dreaded mark goes not away
I am an unusual man
Uncanny that I cannot change
* Gator, slang for alligator
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- Poem and Photo Copyright, Jimmiehov 2021, All Rights Reserved
- Magaly's desire, write "poetry or prose which includes one (or all 3) of the following words: unusual, uncommon, uncanny. You are welcomed to choose your own topic, genre, form… But your contribution must include at least one of the words."
- My little man? He is a musical toy who will sing us a song if I give him some new batteries. First solo exhibit of him alone on my blogs, before he was always sitting with him being beside his singing elephant friend.
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Labels: Fiction, Humor, Humor(?), Poem, Story, Story Poem, Syllabic Form, Toys, Weekly Scribblings
8 Comments:
Fascinating! And now of course I am trying to figure out what that mark could be. (But I expect you are not allowed to say.)
What a great fun poem and how unusual you are.Haha Don't know what cocklebur means. I was also wondering about these marks
I am sure Jim we all have a secret (or less mentioned) habit that makes us who we are as it is far better to be unique than just an ordinary guy.
I really like the progression of the poem. And the ending, too. I'm glad the speaker can't change their uncanniness--uncanny is forever!
An uncommon man indeed! From birthmarks to leprechauns, from Gator Ade to raw potatoes, cocklebur mattress and torn silk sheets, and cold showers with Oxen Dolls (and I'll have to Google that!) you are the epitome of an unusual man, Jim!!
I dig your exploration of unusual!
'Unusual' is vividly drawn here.Nice.
Excellent poem, Jim! The refrain works very well.
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