Sunday Muse -- Young Hearts Miss Out
My Girl
It was love at first sight
The day I heard her play
From an instrument brash
Came sweet and mellow tones
Smiling not, serious
She tamed her cello fine
Sounding classics for her
She knew not how I felt
Dare not would I meet her
My crush she never knew
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- Poem Copyright , Jimmiehov 2021, All Rights Reserved
- I am linked with Carrie Van Horn for inspiration from her Photo at the Sunday Muse #163, http://thesundaymuse.blogspot.com/2021/06/sunday-muse-163.html?m=1
- THIS IS NOT JIM, he dreams and has had girl crushes not known
Labels: Fiction, Love Story, Poem, Sunday Muse, Syllabic Form
posted by Jim @ 6/05/2021 10:37:00 AM
13 comments
13 Comments:
Falling in love with the music, drawn strongly to the musician — I certainly understand Jim.
Truly lovely Jim! One of your finest!
A secret crush! We all had at least one!
All that listening to Bach Cello concertos so you would have something to talk to her about!
Beautiful song of love Jim
Happy Sunday
Much💛love
Perfectly captured!
This is luscious, Jim .... as is the sound of the cello.
The silent admirer - poignantly portrayed.
Sometimes all you can do is worship from afar. I'm glad her playing brought such joy to you. Maybe one day she will approach him and remove his doubts and fears. Good poem, Jim.
Li/Lisa@tao-talk
Oh crushes, they play us like sad songs at times, but oh the joy when we first feel them.
Dare not would I meet her
My crush she never knew
Love the idea of admiration that is not verbalized. Sincerity can still be registered in one's mind. Great twist in your write, Jim!
Hank
Music and romance...well said.
Painting with a few words such a powerful image.
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