One single impression: Serendipity
Serendipity
I came for dinner
nice landlord did have
running late I was
try to save the night
If the food's all gone
then enjoy the dance
don't waste the evening
try to save the night
Surprise oh surprise
saved a plate they did
will eat with my friend
going to save the night
Waiting too this girl
that's how met my love
she to be my wife
saved the night we did
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Not came saw went—stayed
behold life's mystery revealed
Serendipity
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Copyright © 2008 Jimmiehov. All Rights Reserved
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Labels: Family, First times, Jim's Life, One Single Impression, Poem
posted by Jim @ 10/05/2008 12:01:00 AM
17 comments
17 Comments:
What a sweet romantic poem with a serendipity ending.
..many thanks for "a sweet romantic poem"..
Great moment!
That's a great feelgood poem. Excellent.
A plateful of love...
Jim, you can make use of my post in any way you wish to. Thanks for asking me.
:D
some awesome old-fashioned romance...it reads with such a lovely rhythm
Love the romance and humor in this, it's like a twinkle in the eye caught on the page...make that screen!
You came for dinner and met Mrs. Jim? How lovely, Jim! It's a good thing you stayed!
I very much like the spirit of this poem, Jim. The heart in it is palpable.
These lines are wonderful:
don't waste the evening
try to save the night
Thank you, friend.
Glad you got there even if you were late!
I love this!
There's such a freshness and exhuberance to it, Jim!
Glad you 'stayed' too! Sweet happenstance...
That is so nice! A true love story.
I love it Jim. Thanks for making me smile.
No, I didn't get the little duck from you. Can't remember where, but I've had it for some time.
Have a great day. Big hug. :)
Charming and romantic! Serendipity, indeed!
I love to think of it as "life's mystery revealed." Lovely.
This feels like one of my favorite movies: Enchanted April. Well done!
Went for dinner; found a wife! That's serendipity in the extreme! Happy you!
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