Sunday, September 28, 2008

One single impression: Fleeting

That Night

A fleeting rendezvous it was
From her that night her timid call
Nearing her door what would we do

Womanly instinct guides her now
A hug and kiss embrace some more
Touch and feel with reaches explore

No wine or candles here tonight
Hastily those flirtings to end
Harvesting now as frenzied love

Quickly she leads the dance that night
Over too soon memories won't fade
We part with kiss embrace and wave

Now was our fleeting rendezvous
Forbidden fleeting fantasy
A wistful dream never come true

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17 Comments:

At Saturday, September 27, 2008 11:25:00 PM, Blogger SandyCarlson said...

Sure do love that, Jim! So beautiful, innocent, and frankly not innocent at the same time. Wonderful stuff.

 
At Sunday, September 28, 2008 12:03:00 AM, Blogger Edward S Gault said...

Ah,youthful hopes!-they make great fodder for poetry anyway.
Excellent poem.
Thank You for sharing this.

 
At Sunday, September 28, 2008 12:06:00 AM, OpenID teric said...

Great romantic poem yet soft and subtle.

 
At Sunday, September 28, 2008 1:02:00 AM, Blogger Beth P. said...

Hi Jim--
Sometimes our fantasies are so much more complete and complex than what we call real-time...

Thanks for sharing this--I'm sure all of us can relate!!

 
At Sunday, September 28, 2008 2:40:00 AM, Anonymous Deborah Godin said...

Ah, fleeting and wistful - beautifully done!

 
At Sunday, September 28, 2008 3:55:00 AM, Blogger anthonynorth said...

Beautiful romance. At first it seems so simple, but there deeper and deeper layers.

 
At Sunday, September 28, 2008 7:23:00 AM, Blogger barbs.haiku said...

Boy, that took me back about 40 years, Jim! Anticipating that first romantic interlude... fleeting, to be sure!

 
At Sunday, September 28, 2008 9:09:00 AM, Blogger gautami tripathy said...

Love...I like it!


temporal

 
At Sunday, September 28, 2008 9:26:00 AM, Blogger Sue said...

I like the susgestion that it was more than just the fleeting nature that made it "a wistful dream never come true."

 
At Sunday, September 28, 2008 10:14:00 AM, OpenID fourwindshaiga said...

Wow, that was fun!

 
At Sunday, September 28, 2008 12:06:00 PM, Blogger Nancy Bea Miller said...

Wow, so romantic! And you are very welcome, I am glad you liked my prompt. It is fascinating to see all the different interpretations that have come of it!

 
At Sunday, September 28, 2008 4:37:00 PM, Blogger Sioux said...

Lovely, Jim!!

 
At Monday, September 29, 2008 10:06:00 AM, Blogger qualcosa di bello said...

flirting with fleeting! i agree with sandy...innocent & sweet, but not...

 
At Monday, September 29, 2008 6:53:00 PM, Blogger tumblewords said...

Ah, the innocence and the not-so! Very nice work!

 
At Tuesday, September 30, 2008 1:36:00 AM, Blogger ARCHITECT said...

beautifully written....
please visit my wordless wednesday.. its up already.. i will not be able to log in tomorrow thats why i'm visitng all you guys today..
My entries are here. and here

sweet..pretty..naughty
Memory Filled
Sweety tots

 
At Tuesday, September 30, 2008 10:02:00 AM, Blogger Kimmie said...

That was beautifully written Jim. I have yet to try my hand at this. I love the the way you started soft and built up the ending. It took me back to first loves, touches and the romance of young love. Being the romantic that I am, I don't believe that the feelings ever go away. A new love can always stir those same emotions in a person.

I came for your Ruby Tuesday, but I am so happy I saw this also.

 
At Thursday, October 02, 2008 7:02:00 PM, Blogger Kathiesbirds said...

Well, now you've got my heart pounding! A nice little escape from reality...or is it!

 

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