One single impression: Fleeting
That Night
A fleeting rendezvous it was
From her that night her timid call
Nearing her door what would we do
Womanly instinct guides her now
A hug and kiss embrace some more
Touch and feel with reaches explore
No wine or candles here tonight
Hastily those flirtings to end
Harvesting now as frenzied love
Quickly she leads the dance that night
Over too soon memories won't fade
We part with kiss embrace and wave
Now was our fleeting rendezvous
Forbidden fleeting fantasy
A wistful dream never come true
A fleeting rendezvous it was
From her that night her timid call
Nearing her door what would we do
Womanly instinct guides her now
A hug and kiss embrace some more
Touch and feel with reaches explore
No wine or candles here tonight
Hastily those flirtings to end
Harvesting now as frenzied love
Quickly she leads the dance that night
Over too soon memories won't fade
We part with kiss embrace and wave
Now was our fleeting rendezvous
Forbidden fleeting fantasy
A wistful dream never come true
Copyright © 2008 Jimmiehov. All Rights Reserved
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Tag: Jim's OSI
Labels: Blogging, Friends, One Single Impression, Poem
posted by Jim @ 9/28/2008 12:01:00 AM
17 comments
17 Comments:
Sure do love that, Jim! So beautiful, innocent, and frankly not innocent at the same time. Wonderful stuff.
Ah,youthful hopes!-they make great fodder for poetry anyway.
Excellent poem.
Thank You for sharing this.
Great romantic poem yet soft and subtle.
Hi Jim--
Sometimes our fantasies are so much more complete and complex than what we call real-time...
Thanks for sharing this--I'm sure all of us can relate!!
Ah, fleeting and wistful - beautifully done!
Beautiful romance. At first it seems so simple, but there deeper and deeper layers.
Boy, that took me back about 40 years, Jim! Anticipating that first romantic interlude... fleeting, to be sure!
Love...I like it!
temporal
I like the susgestion that it was more than just the fleeting nature that made it "a wistful dream never come true."
Wow, that was fun!
Wow, so romantic! And you are very welcome, I am glad you liked my prompt. It is fascinating to see all the different interpretations that have come of it!
Lovely, Jim!!
flirting with fleeting! i agree with sandy...innocent & sweet, but not...
Ah, the innocence and the not-so! Very nice work!
beautifully written....
please visit my wordless wednesday.. its up already.. i will not be able to log in tomorrow thats why i'm visitng all you guys today..
My entries are here. and here
sweet..pretty..naughty
Memory Filled
Sweety tots
That was beautifully written Jim. I have yet to try my hand at this. I love the the way you started soft and built up the ending. It took me back to first loves, touches and the romance of young love. Being the romantic that I am, I don't believe that the feelings ever go away. A new love can always stir those same emotions in a person.
I came for your Ruby Tuesday, but I am so happy I saw this also.
Well, now you've got my heart pounding! A nice little escape from reality...or is it!
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