Said, Done, Butchered ~~ a Poem for Friday Writings
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Errant Cow
Well I've said it now
Laid food for the cow
Said what I know how
But it isn't done
Yes I've had my fun
Still cow needs a pun
A tasty wry curd
You can say the word
Make queen of the herd
Not good telling puns
(The finishing touch) Butchered every one
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- Photo and Poem Copyright, Jimmiehov 2007 [July 10, 2007] and 2023 Respectively, All Rights Reserved
- I am linked with Rommy at the Friday Writings #83, at
- Rommy says, “the phrase is
‘the finishing touch’. Write something inspired by it.”
- In Ireland; this is an Irish cow, a white face Herford, the rest of the herd were running along the fence
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Labels: Animals, Friday Writings, Humor, Poems, Rhyme, Syllabic Form
posted by Jim @ 6/29/2023 10:34:00 PM
12 comments
12 Comments:
Wasn't expecting the butchering as the finishing touch.. :) :)
Oh, poor cow! That's a 'finishing' touch for sure.
That's definitely a big finish
I've "reworded" this as I was horrified by the reading of these three comments above. My cow hasn't died, she's just not a good at telling puns. Like me.
Please forgive me please, guys.
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Oh, that's better! Thanks for bringing out your real meaning more. (But you can see how we thought the other, in your first version.)
Butchering is such a clear cliche and cattle make us think of it. So it is no wonder you used the word. In the creative world, it is used quite a lot.
Oh glad you clarified. I saw your note on my comments page. Don't we all love a non-punning-cow! No worries. Thanks Jim!
If the response to a pun is a groan, is the response to a cow pun a moo?
Love it, Priscilla.
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Fun! The word butchered is key!
The re-writes work Jim. I get it now.
Thank you Jim, for the udderly fine poem. I am quite amooshed by it. :)
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