At Early Moon -- a dVerse Prosery Piece
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"An early moon is just a piece of change in the softening sky." ** Standing on the bridge squinting my eyes in the waning light I could see into the trees.
There a little brown monkey just weaned from his mother, a beggar bedded down for the night, and swarms of mosquitoes who greeted me. They invited me into their little forest, I willingly went.
Quite an adventure for me, my eyes gradually adapted to the dim. The monkey had playthings scattered beyond his rug, the beggar was swigging a bottle of cheap gin, and none of those mosquitoes would bite.
** first line by James Masao Mitsui, “Spring Poem for the Sake of Breathing, Written After a Walk to Foster Island” for full Poem, click here
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- Photo and Prose piece Copyright, Jimmiehov 2023, All Rights Reserved (The bridge was a part of my friend, John's, five-acre yard. We often had car club meetings at his home. John died a few years ago.
- I am linked with Merril D Smith for the Prosery Prompt Line which I used as the opening line here. To read about the line's heritage and to see the requirements for the Prosery writing tonight (one is not more than 144 words, I have exactly 144 not including the title), go here,
https://dversepoets.com/2023/06/05/prosery-breathing-and-moons/
- Click here to read others writer's Prosery piece
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Labels: dVerse prompt, Fiction, Moon, Moonlight Musings, Prose, Prosery, Story
10 Comments:
Very creative.😊
I like how you started with the prompt line, Jim, like a spotlight illuminating the scene, and the sweet adventure.
Nice one Jim. A piece of moon for the shadows.
Thanks for dropping by to read mine
Much💚love
Your story is like a dream, and I agree with Kim's comment. Thank you for sharing and writing to the prompt!
Such a specific but foreign scene to me that I was leaning into your tale immediately! It was a lovely experience.
Very well written, Jim! Creative...
Much love,
David
SkepticsKaddish.com
This has a dream like quality, perhaps in that moment they had more in common then meets the eye.
Great write Dr Jim, love it! You cleverly had them all connected around you despite the differing context of situation earlier narrated!
Hank
It has a dreamlike quality lovely ❤️
What a wonderful company you found.... it sounds like a dream
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