Tuesday, May 23, 2023

Wearied Artist -- a Poem for dVerse Poetics

“Portrait of Halvor John Schou” painted in 1911 by the artist Thorvald Hellesen (1888 – 1937)
   I Was Tired 

I was tired and weary 
Painting day and night 
Pictures of people 
Animals Vegetables 
Fruit and Trees 
And more 

Never could get to my 
Hearts desire 
Painted bolts of  cloth 
Sides of cars 
Lunch  boxes 
And sacks 


Finally got so bad 
Was painting 
Walls of the . . . 

Of the house 
Upstairs 
And 
Down 

My misses said 
"You painted your 
Last straw 
Now that you've 
Painted your 
Selfie 

Three D 
On the wall" 

I used to enjoy 
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 - Poem Copyright,  Jimmiehov 2023, All Rights Reserved 
 - Photo prompt furnished by Lillian at dVerse Poetics,  it is a portrait by the artist Thorvald Hellesen (1888 – 1937) 
 - Read more about Lillian and Thorvald Hellesen at Lillian's dVerse prompt page, 
 - You can read how others have written when inspired by Hellen's pictures here 
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12 Comments:

At Tuesday, May 23, 2023 10:54:00 PM, Blogger Gillena Cox said...

LOL nice one Jim. He does look exhausted.
Happy you dropped by my blog.

Much💖love

 
At Wednesday, May 24, 2023 4:01:00 AM, Blogger Kim M. Russell said...

That’s a nice take on the image, Jim: it’s not the subject of the painting who is tired, but the artist himself! I chuckled at the thought of him painting the walls of the house.

 
At Wednesday, May 24, 2023 6:09:00 AM, Anonymous seanatbogie said...

Got a chuckle from me. He certainly does look world weary.

 
At Wednesday, May 24, 2023 6:37:00 AM, Anonymous Lillian said...

Ah....a different take on the prompt....writing from the perspective of the painter himself. Good one! And oh my....he "descends" to painting walls in the house. A frustrated artist? One who is not recognized for his work and moves from painting to posters to designs for textiles.....and ultimately to painting the walls of the house! Thanks for posting to the prompt! I enjoyed this one.

 
At Wednesday, May 24, 2023 1:55:00 PM, Blogger brudberg said...

What an obsession to paint... you have to but cannot let go of the brush

 
At Wednesday, May 24, 2023 2:34:00 PM, Blogger Helen said...

Of course, Dr. Jim decided to go in a different direction, how very clever of you. I enjoyed my visit with your artist.

 
At Wednesday, May 24, 2023 6:59:00 PM, Anonymous Anonymous said...

A unique and light-hearted take on the image. I especially like the pause with "Wall of the...." . Wondering where his brush would take him next!

 
At Wednesday, May 24, 2023 6:59:00 PM, Anonymous Anonymous said...

~Mish

 
At Wednesday, May 24, 2023 7:17:00 PM, Blogger Grace said...

I love how you interpreted this one Jim. Tired indeed!

 
At Thursday, May 25, 2023 5:47:00 PM, Anonymous AJ said...

Love it 😃

 
At Thursday, May 25, 2023 7:01:00 PM, Blogger Christine said...

Poor guy has worn himself out only to be pushed aside like his painting

 
At Thursday, May 25, 2023 7:23:00 PM, Anonymous JadeLi said...

I'm imagining painting on commission would be very different than painting for fun. To turn a love into a job very well could become exhausting. Textured look at the image, Jim.

 

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