Monday, May 15, 2023

Mirror subject Poem -- for dVerse Quadrille

 

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    Miror, Mirror


Mirror, mirror, on the wall

Do your magic, make me tall

Make me short or make me thin

Make me plump, it's all within

Remembering good old days

Playland park was meant for play


Load the car, rides'r outdoors

Visit the magic mirrors

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18 Comments:

At Monday, May 15, 2023 3:17:00 PM, Blogger Gillena Cox said...

Nice one. Does the mirror ever obey?

Much💖love

 
At Monday, May 15, 2023 3:52:00 PM, Anonymous ben Alexander said...

This is a super fun poem, Jim!

All best,
David
SkepticsKaddish.com

 
At Monday, May 15, 2023 6:21:00 PM, Anonymous Anonymous said...

Oh yes, those funny magic mirrors at the amusement park!

 
At Monday, May 15, 2023 6:47:00 PM, Blogger Dwight L. Roth said...

Such fun memories! You are right it changed us in very wierd ways. Glad my bathroom mirror doesn't play those games with me!

 
At Monday, May 15, 2023 7:14:00 PM, Anonymous Melissa Lemay said...

I love those mirrors. They make me laugh.

 
At Monday, May 15, 2023 7:35:00 PM, Blogger K.Hartless said...

Fun invitation for mischief and play. Yes!

 
At Monday, May 15, 2023 7:38:00 PM, Blogger kaykuala said...

Load the car, rides outdoors
Visit the magic mirrors

What fun it was to see ourselves transformed into various shapes and sizes immediately and accompanied by the loud laughs. Nicely done Jim!

Hank

 
At Monday, May 15, 2023 7:40:00 PM, Blogger Arcadia Maria said...

Well done poem, Jim.

 
At Monday, May 15, 2023 8:39:00 PM, Blogger Nicole Horlings said...

This is a really fun take on the prompt.

 
At Monday, May 15, 2023 9:21:00 PM, Anonymous Anonymous said...

haha - This reminded me of the house of mirrors - distorting one's image in the looking glass. They were sometimes tricky to navigate through. Seeing way too many of me at once. haha...

 
At Monday, May 15, 2023 9:22:00 PM, Anonymous Anonymous said...

Sorry - That was me Truedessa

 
At Tuesday, May 16, 2023 12:52:00 AM, Blogger rogblog666 said...

great poem

 
At Tuesday, May 16, 2023 2:40:00 AM, Blogger Kim M. Russell said...

A magic mirror spell is great fun, Jim! I must try it out.

 
At Tuesday, May 16, 2023 4:52:00 AM, Blogger paeansunplugged said...

I remember those figure distorting mirrors at fairs! A fun verse, Jim.

 
At Tuesday, May 16, 2023 11:20:00 AM, Blogger Helen said...

I love magic mirrors, the nuttier the better ... and I enjoyed how you used them in your quadrille.

 
At Tuesday, May 16, 2023 2:32:00 PM, Blogger brudberg said...

I used to enjoy those mirror mazes until I found out the trick of looking down toward the floor and find my way without being tricked.

 
At Tuesday, May 16, 2023 3:06:00 PM, Anonymous AJ said...

Love how you captured the sensation in your poem Jim

 
At Wednesday, May 17, 2023 8:11:00 AM, Blogger Rosemary Nissen-Wade said...

Lovely and light-hearted!

 

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