Fools? -- Poem, a Write for Friday Writings
We the Farmers; Foolish Pair
Having killed our goose to eat
Goose that laid the golden egg
And eaten rest of our flock
Farmer boy, got city job
My wife was cleaning houses
Wages pooled we'd buy new flock
Hoping to train the new geese
More who would lay golden eggs
We would be rich like the kings
Spent money on geese, goose things
Geese ate well happy and sleek
Worked hard for our goal to meet
(Died poor all for golden dream)
(Golden eggs are never real)
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- Photo and Poem Copyright, Jimmiehov 2023, All Rights Reserved (photo is of "Bing" search for "Goose That Laid the Golden Eggs")
- I am linked with Rosemary for the Friday Writings #75 at https://poetsandstorytellersunited.blogspot.com/?m=1
- Rosemary has asked us to "take a well-known myth or fable and write as one of the main characters (not necessarily retelling their story so much as inhabiting their skin)."
- Read some of the Aesop's Fables at this URL,
https://interestingliterature.com/2021/09/best-aesop-fables-summaries/
- The original Aesop's tale of the Golden Goose should be there
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Labels: Friday Writings, Imperfect Rhyme, Poem, Rhyme, Sonnet, Syllabic Form
9 Comments:
Oh, very nicely done, Jim!
I like the mix of irony and humor. I guess winning the lottery is the false hope of golden eggs now.
There are good lessons here. More, more, more … we are never satisfied with what we have and greed is too often ruler of the roost.
I am like your wife with driving. I have dyscalculia. Check it out https://looseleafnotes.com/2023/01/do-you-have-dyscalculia/comment-page-1/#comment-1293075
Sigh. Sad but true. Some fairy tales are just that.
That expectation of more geese laying more golden eggs... sigh.. I like what you did with this prompt!
Oh, if even the slightest chance! Well done.
Golden eggs are fraught with problems and best avoided......Rall
Oh, if we only could train geese to lay golden eggs, we'd, in the words of Robert Louis Stevenson, "all be as happy as kings."
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