Saturday, May 27, 2023

Oceans and Cities -- A Poem for the Sunday Muse

        Angels are Busy Tonight 

    When oceans rise cities flood 
    Streets become paths of water 
    New Venice a thousand times 
    Unexpected near midnight 

    Climate Change Global Warming 
    Cities will flood people drown  
    Unpredicted Solar Flare 
    That straw broke the camel's back 

    Communications were down 
    Traffic was stopped world around 
    Came Flash flood Oceans did rise 
    People unaware of its coming 

    Angels helped in the cities  
    My angel stopped for a pose 
    People began to believe 
    Oceans rose and people drowned 
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 - Poem Copyright, Jimmiehov 2023, All Rights Reserved 
 - Photo from Carries last choices, all previously used, see them at the Final Sunday Muse (#261), https://thesundaymuse.blogspot.com/2023/05/sunday-muse-261.html
 - This poem is new to me, a Quatern Form, where the first verse works it's, or a variation of (here), way down to the fourth and last line of the last verse.   Read about it here and my first poem Thursday, May 25, using the form here.
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7 Comments:

At Sunday, May 28, 2023 12:30:00 AM, Blogger Sherry Blue Sky said...

It's not that far off either. Nice to read you, Jim.

 
At Sunday, May 28, 2023 7:43:00 AM, Blogger qbit said...

Hey, it's been a great run. Don't be a stranger.

 
At Sunday, May 28, 2023 9:25:00 AM, Blogger C. Sandlin said...

Yikes. Yikes. I just have this image of exhausted angels like bus conductors gathering souls into trains away from another drowned world.

 
At Sunday, May 28, 2023 11:18:00 AM, Blogger Carrie Burtt said...

The cities definitely need angels Jim. Thank you for being at the Muse each week my friend! Keep writing and stay in touch!

 
At Sunday, May 28, 2023 1:45:00 PM, Blogger Helen said...

Going to miss you at The Muse .... certain we will continue to read each other often! Cheers.

 
At Monday, May 29, 2023 11:57:00 AM, Blogger Keith's Ramblings said...

Thank goodness for angels! Nice one.

 
At Monday, May 29, 2023 1:31:00 PM, Anonymous Ange said...

Great poem Jim, I expect even angels have their limits ❤️

 

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