Trouble Brewing - a Poem for dVerse Quadrille
Found Stuff from Drawers
A Gasp and a Half
Twenty-four hours ago
I called the IRS
Younger voice answered me
I had money to pay 16
Was told I had to have
an ID in my file
She looked to see, was there?
Info ID needed 20
I gasped out loud
Of those I've none . 8
44 words
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- I am linked with Sanaa and De Jackson for the prompt word, "gasp", at
- Their request is that our quadrille should be exactly 44 words, not including the title and include the word “Gasp” or a derivative of the word.
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Labels: dVerse prompt, Flash Writing, Poem, Story Poem
posted by Jim @ 3/06/2023 04:38:00 PM
8 comments
8 Comments:
Jim ~ this is so true to life ~ a real slice of human experience...
Sincerely,
David
SkepticsKaddish.com
This is incredibly evocative!
Kind of amazing you actually got a human voice to speak to. 😏
So relatable, I see this happen with Dad and bank-people all the time, that gasp was audible.
Happens with everyone at sometime or the other.
Aah! Don't remind me. I haven't had my run in with them yet, am sorting through papers now! A relatable write.
Pat
Excellent poem.
A gasp of a moment, indeed. Yikes!
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