Saturday, February 25, 2023

"Does she love me?" -- a Write for the Sunday Muse


Shivers; 
all about love

She loves him she loves him not 
Sitting on threshold of love 
Somberly he thinks of that 

Seems three petals yet to go 
Selection by kiddie love 
Some never outgrow this stage 

Some wish upon a bright star 
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- Poem Copyright, Jimmiehov 2023, All Rights Reserved 
- I am linked with Carrie for the picture prompt, The Sunday Muse #248 
- A "Seven's ditty", Seven lines each with Seven syllables all Seven start the same letter.
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4 Comments:

At Saturday, February 25, 2023 4:11:00 PM, Blogger Carrie Van Horn said...

Love can make children of us all Jim. I enjoyed your poem and hope you have a good weekend!

 
At Saturday, February 25, 2023 7:43:00 PM, Blogger kaykuala said...

It may be perhaps not the second childhood but a stage nearer before reaching the horrors of senility. It is frightening Dr Jim! Keeping occupied is a portent force apparently!

Hank

 
At Sunday, February 26, 2023 4:46:00 PM, Anonymous JadeLi said...

Love has a will of its own and visits where it will. I feel bad for those whom it does not visit. Good poem, Jim.

 
At Sunday, February 26, 2023 5:52:00 PM, Anonymous AJ said...

Love is love at any age <3

 

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