On my way
I'm flying my way to eternity
God furnished this silver beast of the sea
I'm passing over where I had used to live
Now high in the sky not allowed to dive
That means there really is no turning back
Peered into my tube those behind I see
Distant relatives not waving at me
They've decided to stay and not to go
Another winter stay--play in the snow
Fearful and masked for them it's too late now
Some are trying to come up anyhow
Their future I don't know--for sure they'll bow
They've waded in the pond to have a dip
Saw sister doing--saw sense not a bit
Friend Peter at the door--he has the key
Others struggling like scare crows they can't move
Stuck in the ground to ride their earthly poles
Wings won't fly that way--only to the east
Their need like sister's silver flying beast
Stuck tied to the ground will never get loose
Comes the new dawn skyscrapers turn to trees The forest gives those with a light the creeps
Worms are scurrying underground to hide
Wait until dawn try the problem to find
Darkness--Moon, Sun, and shining light go out
All doors are locked there's no way to go up Masses crowd into the hall--push and shove
Safety inside? This isn't really right
Outside there seems to be no help or light
Friend Peter minds the door--he has the key
Tombstones fallen and graves to fill Emptied by beasts--they've silver wings and gills
We're going to Peter, man with the keys
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- Poem Copyright, Jimmiehov 2023, All Rights Reserved
- Pictures and Photo furnished by Carrie Van Horn for our inspiration at the Sunday Muse #247,
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Labels: Artistic Interpretations, Poem, Rhyme, Story Poem, Sunday Muse 03, Syllabic Form
6 Comments:
This would make a wonderful continued story Jim! A life passing to the other side. Wonderful writing my friend!
This was interesting--the dual sense of dread and escape reminded me of being a child and not having much control over circumstances.
Great how you weaved the story :) (AJ)
You themed death throughtout. Its amazing how you responded to all the images
Happy Sunday
Much❤love
I want a flying fish I can ride!
A story well told, Jim!
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