Saturday, February 18, 2023

Man with the Keys -- a Write for the Sunday Muse



On my way 

I'm flying my way to eternity
God furnished this silver beast of the sea 
I'm passing over where I had used to live 
Now high in the sky not allowed to dive 
That means there really is no turning back 


Peered into my tube those behind I see 
Distant relatives not waving at me 
They've decided to stay and not to go 
Another winter stay--play in the snow 
Fearful and masked for them it's too late now 


Some are trying to come up anyhow 
Their future I don't know--for sure they'll bow 
They've waded in the pond to have a dip 
Saw sister doing--saw sense not a bit 
Friend Peter at the door--he has the key 


Others struggling like scare crows they can't move 
Stuck in the ground to ride their earthly poles 
Wings won't fly that way--only to the east  
Their need like sister's silver flying beast 
Stuck tied to the ground will never get loose 


Comes the new dawn skyscrapers turn to trees 
The forest gives those with a light the creeps 
Worms are scurrying underground to hide 
Wait until dawn try the problem to find 
Darkness--Moon, Sun, and shining light go out 



All doors are locked there's no way to go up 
Masses crowd into the hall--push and shove 
Safety inside? This isn't really right 
Outside there seems to be no help or light 
Friend Peter minds the door--he has the key 


Tombstones fallen and graves to fill 
Emptied by beasts--they've silver wings and gills 

We're going to Peter, man with the keys 
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 - Poem Copyright, Jimmiehov 2023, All Rights Reserved 
 - Pictures and Photo furnished by Carrie Van Horn for our inspiration at the Sunday Muse #247,  
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6 Comments:

At Sunday, February 19, 2023 8:53:00 AM, Blogger Carrie Burtt said...

This would make a wonderful continued story Jim! A life passing to the other side. Wonderful writing my friend!

 
At Sunday, February 19, 2023 8:57:00 AM, Blogger C. Sandlin said...

This was interesting--the dual sense of dread and escape reminded me of being a child and not having much control over circumstances.

 
At Sunday, February 19, 2023 10:34:00 AM, Anonymous Anonymous said...

Great how you weaved the story :) (AJ)

 
At Sunday, February 19, 2023 12:47:00 PM, Blogger Gillena Cox said...

You themed death throughtout. Its amazing how you responded to all the images

Happy Sunday

Much❤love

 
At Sunday, February 19, 2023 7:56:00 PM, Blogger qbit said...

I want a flying fish I can ride!

 
At Saturday, February 25, 2023 7:20:00 PM, Blogger purplepeninportland.com said...

A story well told, Jim!

 

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