Seeers are believers -- a Ditty for Friday Writings
Comes the Stomper Outers
Mean
Stomper Outers' discovery
They came, the stomper outers
Killjoyed the little kids
Ruiners to them
Dismay the girls
Cry their fun
Bursted
Joy
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- Poem Copyright, Jimmiehov 2023, All Rights Reserved
- I'm linked with Magaly for the Prompt phrase at the Friday Writings #70 at
- Photo from Carrie at Sunday Muse #252
- Hooked with Grace at "Wordplay",
- I think my poem is a Reverse cinquain based on syllable count. It will work either way:
Joy
Bursted
Cry their fun
Dismay the girls
Ruiners to them
Killjoyed the little kids
They came, the stomper outers
Stomper Outers' discovery
Mean
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Labels: Ditty Poem, dVerse prompt, Flash Writing, Friday Writings, Poem, Poem forms, Syllabic Form
posted by Jim @ 3/30/2023 08:53:00 PM
8 comments
8 Comments:
Am thinking there are adults as well who like to go around bursting other people's bubbles... I haven't used that term before, but stomper-outer works!!!!
This form of poetry is really new. I will try this out sometime. Thanks for introducing this to me.
I love the way your reverse cinquain works both ways – and even more than that, I love the pithy language.
Interesting. Laughing and crying often seem to go hand in hand. One not too far from the other. Even if just in childish fun. Cool form.
What an clear and descriptive name. Stomper Outers are everywhere. Sometimes we need them but mostly we don't, and sometimes it's even someone like you or me. :)
Children or adults, does it matter? People who demand that someone else stop reading and endure their chatter.
Some people, young and old, are so good at ruining a good thing. Sigh.
Good one,Jim! I like that you used this photo.
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