Thursday, September 08, 2022

The Cat - a Prose Poem for Friday Writings


    Toxic Love*
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I brought my cat home; he loved me at sight.  I was carrying a piece of fried chicken and gave him a hunk.  He ate.  He crawled into my lap, purring like he was my loving boy slave.   

That was nice but not, he wanted to sleep with me that very first night.  I put his bed on the floor and told him that was his bed.  

Wasn't long, the first program of "Murder She Wrote" was still playing when he jumped in bed with me.  I couldn't make him leave without making a big fuss.

Oops, we can't be doing this, tomorrow will be different.  

Next I knew he had wiggled his way under the sheet to be closer to me.  Purring a bit, he soon went to sleep.  That was good.  "Good dreams," I thought. 

About two o'clock, I felt an itch, a BIG ITCH.  I scratched it a little, it felt wet.  Blood was coming from my leg.  There was a scratch, "I must cut my fingernails closer".  After some suave and a band aide I went back to sleep.  

An hour later I scream.  The Cat was biting my nose.  Auch.  My nose was bleeding, and hurt, not just an itch.  I whacked The Cat and he went running.  I went after him but couldn't find, he was hiding someplace in the house. 

After that night, I closed my bedroom door, his bed was in the living room by the couch.  One night he woke me up, biting really hard again.  I chased him away and doctored my bod.  I am sure he had been hiding under the bed.
  
He's bolder now, thinks he should rule.  When I pass, he paws my leg.  And when I sit, he crawls onto my lap and purrs.  Some days though, he'll scratch or bite, bites me all over, he likes open skin.

I can't give him away; I love him too much.  I'd like for him to behave and even be back with me at night but seems he is a slow learner about how to be a welcome roommate. 

Now, nobody wants him.  I'm stuck. 
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 - Magaly has invited us to write (either a poem or a piece of prose) about "Toxic Love". [I wrote 359 Words, limit was 360.  I call it prose.]
 - Photo and Poem Copyright, Jimmiehov 2022, All Rights Reserved. 
 - The cat in the picture belongs to my daughter.  He does sleep with her and he will bite her while she is sleeping.  But the cat here is a metaphor (??) of sorts, I didn't write about my daughter.  I want the poem to stand alone, think cat or guy, it matters to me not.  Just enjoy.
 - I am linked with Magaly at The Friday Writings #43, at 
  https://poetsandstorytellersunited.blogspot.com/search/label/poetry%20prompts
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*Note: 
"In a toxic relationship, you might consistently feel drained or unhappy after spending time with your partner, according to relationship therapist Jor-El Caraballo, which can suggest that some things need to change.
"Maybe the relationship no longer feels at all enjoyable, though you still love your partner. For some reason, you always seem to rub each other the wrong way or can’t seem to stop arguing over minor issues. You might even dread the thought of seeing them, instead of looking forward to it as you did in the past.. ."  There's more, read here what the signs are for this strange critter (really not an oxymoron even if it does sound like one). 
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15 Comments:

At Thursday, September 08, 2022 11:40:00 PM, Anonymous Rajani said...

Oh dear! I know literally nothing about cats, but I hope one can train a cat or convince him somehow...I hope so, if you're stuck with him. Hugs to you both!!!

 
At Thursday, September 08, 2022 11:56:00 PM, Blogger Rosemary Nissen-Wade said...

This cat must have had an unhappy childhood, is all I can say! If they snuggle and purr, they don't usually scratch and bite as well. But you tell it entertainingly, and I can get it as metaphor.

 
At Friday, September 09, 2022 9:34:00 AM, Blogger colleen said...

I got scratched across my face by my friend's jealous cat and closed the door to cats ever since. But I suspect your story to be creative nonfiction? So much biting.

 
At Friday, September 09, 2022 11:24:00 AM, Blogger Magical Mystical Teacher said...

Your story/poem explains exactly why I'm not a cat person!

 
At Friday, September 09, 2022 11:55:00 AM, Blogger Debi Swim said...

Oh, my, a Jekyll and Hyde cat. I can see where trust issues would come in.

 
At Friday, September 09, 2022 12:08:00 PM, Blogger Helen said...

Oh dear! I can relate to your post. We had a black cat years ago (one of many over the years) who 'attacked' two of our children, more than once. That was the end of "Charlie" he went to our local humane society. I later learned he was adopted (though they are not encouraged to share details) and became a "barn mouser!" Cheers.

 
At Friday, September 09, 2022 12:29:00 PM, Blogger Gillena Cox said...

That is a first rate toxic love story Jim.
Have a good weekend

Much💛love

 
At Friday, September 09, 2022 1:05:00 PM, Blogger Magaly Guerrero said...

Oh, goodness! A relationship that leaves a body with battle scars is definitely a toxic one. I wonder what made him so violent...

 
At Friday, September 09, 2022 1:26:00 PM, Anonymous Anonymous said...

He is playing rough!
Jim
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At Sunday, September 11, 2022 7:21:00 AM, Blogger dsnake1 said...

Haha, enjoyed your delightful tale of your cat. Hope he's more well-behaved now.
Oh, so it's just a fictional tale inspired by your daughter's cat.

 
At Sunday, September 11, 2022 10:23:00 AM, Anonymous Jewish Young Professional "JYP" said...

I'm a cat lover and I found this story wonderfully amusing and so spot-on!

 
At Sunday, September 11, 2022 4:21:00 PM, Anonymous Sunra Rainz said...

I enjoyed reading about the gradual bonding between you and your new friend in this write :-). it gave me paws for thought (sorry lol)

 
At Tuesday, September 13, 2022 11:44:00 AM, Anonymous Anonymous said...

Definitely not a cat, or human, I want to be hanging around. Your poem has me glad our Molly the Cat was more of a purrr cat. :-)

 
At Tuesday, September 13, 2022 11:45:00 AM, Blogger Su-sieee! Mac said...

Whoops, Jim, I forgot to change anonymous (above comment) to me.

 
At Tuesday, September 13, 2022 9:01:00 PM, Blogger Priscilla King said...

I'm glad this is a metaphoric cat. Some cats do play roughly, and some will nip to get attention, start a game, demand control of the bed, etc., but usually that behavior is easy to correct if it appears.

My cats don't usually want to share my bed and aren't invited to. When they are allowed to curl up, usually on top of a few layers of bedding that are on top of my feet, they've all been very, very polite as we all got through the emergency (usually extra-cold weather).

 

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