Saturday, August 20, 2022

Lonely - a somewhat Dark Poem for the Sunday Muse

Photography by Alicia Savage

Awake feeling lonely again 

Once more she'd washed the dress she has 
Faithful friend mostly hides behind 
Faces the world but really not 
Incognito dwelling from all 
with all her fears 
closely behind 

Hanging that dress in the open 
Hoping, she sings find me find me  
Please I want better company 
The dress is old it's very old 
Though it's tired as she's 
 it hides not 

And her fears get washed now and then 
They never get clean like the dress 
Hidden long enough so go home 
Have a glass of wine 
soak her feet 

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 - Poem Copyright, Jimmiehov 2022, All Rights Reserved 
 - Photo prompts from Carrie at the Sunday Muse, 
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4 Comments:

At Saturday, August 20, 2022 4:36:00 PM, Blogger Carrie Burtt said...

The emotions in this really sing out Jim. I felt these lines like a cotton dress up on the skin.

 
At Saturday, August 20, 2022 7:43:00 PM, Anonymous JadeLi said...

Interesting poem, Jim. Sometimes being alone with one's thoughts is not all it's cracked up to be.

 
At Sunday, August 21, 2022 1:33:00 PM, Blogger Helen said...

The title of your poem spoke volumes ........... Cheers and Happy Sunday.

 
At Monday, August 22, 2022 4:54:00 PM, Blogger Susie Clevenger said...

Oh, I feel it. There are times lonely fits too well, feels so familiar.

 

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