Magic Ride - a Write for Poetics at dVerse
Lee Madgwick (leemadgwick.co.uk) Welcome Welcome to the magic ride to the place you will find It's where we don't really know It's guaranteed to please You'll be pleased or money back What we know you dare not ask Ask and you cannot go You'll be just a bit higher Higher than you think Exquisite for prairie land Whole ride's guaranteed to please It pleases us to please you |
Labels: Artistic Interpretations, Boat Poems, boats, dVerse prompt, Riddle Poem, Syllabic Form
9 Comments:
I got a Beatles-y vibe off this. A little bit psychedelic, somehow.
Indeed a magical ride Jim.
The mystery is waiting to take you away...I too feel a Beatles vibe, which is quite fine with me. - True
Makes me think the ride is different for each person who partakes. Magicla indeed!
Magical indeed, Jim!
Nice one Jim. A magical mood displayed
Much💛love
Sounds like a wonderful amusement park... and like Sarah says made me think of the Beatles
Good take on the prompt. I like the idea of mystery on the other side. seanatbogie
I'd like one ticket for each ride, please!
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