Weekly Scribblings prose poem -- Loving Three
We "burst into constellations of dance"
Way too young for most, a boy toy so nice fulfilled her every whim. She taught him every loving move he makes. Now he's starting to make his own. Another keeper, stays with her. She calls him "Jimmy Boy, the Butler here"
"Love can be a monster, or not"
Her third choice truly loves her, experienced in all ways. Taught her much. Ravishing her over and over. A monster with teeth of Jell-O and bubble gum mix, perfect for the tasty nibbles he takes. She gurgles with delight and calls him "Igor". Imagine to your wildest extent, Igor would be there
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Liked them all
Fulfilling her needs and desires
She's keeping all three
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- Poem and Photo Copyright , Jimmiehov 2921, All Rights Reserved
- I'm linked with Rommy at the Writer's Pantry #58, https://poetsandstorytellersunited.blogspot.com/2021/02/writers-pantry-58-is-it-spring-yet.html
and
- I'm linked with Magaly Guerrero at Weekly Scribblings #57, https://poetsandstorytellersunited.blogspot.com/2021/02/weekly-scribblings-57-let-us-write.html?m=1
- Magaly has written three nice poems linked by my titles and wishes for us to use one or more of her titles for our writing. I used all three as openings for my three paragraphs here.
- The pictured two inch small wooden dolls are a part of a toy village that our younger daughter had when little. They are about 40 years old.
(And if she soured shed them one by one??)
Labels: Dance, Poem, prose poem, Story, Story Poem, Toys, Weekly Scribbling
posted by Jim @ 2/18/2021 09:28:00 AM
9 comments
9 Comments:
Super interesting progression. The speaker and subjects seem to have really big hearts, with enough space to invite big loves. The senryu made me smile.
In a world where there seems to be a love shortage sometimes, its nice to hear about hearts that make plenty of room for all sorts of love in their hearts.
Sign me up for number two .... boy toys and dancing!
What a lucky girl! A delightful read, Jim, especially when accompanied by that fun illustration depicting them all.
those toys certainly bring me back! I always loved the dog. Sounds like many stages of love... Number two sounds fun! :)
I like your depiction of different loves. I would keep them all. Enjoy your creative, imaginative poetry.
Haha this made me laugh Some interesting lovers here.
Love your words "burst into constellations of dance" and
"teeth of Jell-O and bubble gum mix" :)
I enjoyed this the second time around, too.
Excellent, Jim! Love these witty descriptions, and your ending.
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