Weekly Scribblings -- Poem for Words in The Way of Tea
"What is life? It is the flash of a firefly in the night. It is the breath of a buffalo in the wintertime. It is the little shadow which runs across the grass and loses itself in the sunset." - Blackfoot'
Hotaru-gari –
(go searching for fireflies)
Fireflies in need
The jar is empty
Dumped by the roadside
Older ones grown dim
Had they batteries
LEDs delight
So if you grow old
Smooth your wrinkle lines
Step lively my dear
Lest they dump you
in the ditch
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- Poem Copyright, Jimmiehov 2021, All Rights Reserved
- I'm linked with Rommy for prompt and your viewing, https://poetsandstorytellersunited.blogspot.com/2021/01/weekly-scribblings-53-beautiful-words.html
- for this week's Weekly Scribblings, Rommy would like us to create new poetry or prose using one (or as many as we want) of the poetic terms she selected out of Bruce Hamana Sosei’s book, 100 Beautiful Words in The Way of Tea, (seven listed below).
For Artistic Interpretation, for Weekly Scribblings #53: Beautiful Words
Zuiun – clouds that predict good fortune; Shitamoe – plants sprouting under last year’s dried grass or under the snow; Hatsuyume – the first dream of the new year Uzumibi – buried fire; Ryokuin – green shadows (sunlight filtering through green leaves) Hotaru-gari – go searching for fireflies Tsuki-koru – the moon freezes
7 Comments:
The middle stanza is especially good. I enjoyed this.
Step lively... I'm trying, Jim, even if those wrinkles won't smooth. I'm not ready for the ditch : )
I love your opening quote, and all the reflections you present us with in the poem.
Oh No! Not the ditch! Please ..... I like my wrinkles.
I am ditch-destined it seems. May as well pick out good curtains to hang up when I move in. :D
Love it. Yes, we must move as fast as we can lest we become discarded.
There is one old dim bulb I would like to see in a ditch Jim, and then covered over?
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