Fourteen Crows
 
  Fourteen crows came knocking at my door 
The leader said to me, come outside 
That was a mistake for me to go 
But I went.
 
  Again the leader asked me to bow 
Bow to him as he was new in charge 
I told him, Phewie, then turned and left 
Not so fast. 
 
  Those fourteen crows quickly blocked my path 
You can't go, we are taking your house 
A place for the new world headquarters 
I'll break your line.
 
  Their line was tough as a steel cable 
Speedy breakthrough was of no avail 
Called my daughter, bring my gun, loaded 
They cut my line.
 
  Cutting the line did nothing for them 
It was my cell phone that I had used 
The call went through, my gun was coming 
Birds understood not. 
 
  Their threat had weakened just a little 
And things were looking a bit brighter 
She arrived, handed me the weapon 
Crows approached, mean look.
 
  I had that shotgun on my shoulder 
Took aim and fired the first round of shots 
Three fell dead, I was getting ahead 
Then I awoke. 
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 - Photo and Poem Copyright © 2017 Jimmiehov, All Rights Reserved 
 - The instructions: "So, write about crows, or from the point of view of a crow, or use them as metaphors. Just write about crows!"
 
 - Note:  The birds in my picture may not have been crows.  If not, they are related vultures.
 
Labels: Birds, Driving Pictures, NaPoWriMo 2017, Poem, Real Toads, Syllabic Form
    
     
    
  
  
8 Comments:
Love the surprise ending!
Oy, waking up with a gunshot ringing in your head can't have been pleasant.
Oh my what a dream... Crow hunting doesn't make sweet dreams
Man. What a dream. Well done.
I love this! Beautifully penned, Jim ❤️
Oh, you had me sucked right in. Often the 'then I woke up' ending is a cop-out, but in this case it works beautifully.
Those look more like guineas to me.
Whew! Though waking up to a gunshot is no treat, either.
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