Sunday, April 16, 2017

NaPoWriMo 2017, Day 16 -- Clouds, an American Sentence Poem

. . . . . . . .   HAPPY EASTER !!!

 
 
   Statements; cloud-like 
 
Over town small clouds, boldly proclaim to the folk, over fields they fade

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 - Photos and Poem Copyright © 2017 Jimmiehov, All Rights Reserved
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 - I'm linked with at the Imaginary Garden with Real Toads, Micro Poetry,  http://withrealtoads.blogspot.com/2017/04/micro-poetry-streetlight-rain.html

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 - to Day Sixteen of NaPoWriMo, http://www.napowrimo.net/day-sixteen-4/


 - Kerry has invited us to write an American Sentence Poem which is like a Haiku or Senryū "with seventeen syllables (BUT) going across, linear, like just about everything else in America."

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9 Comments:

At Sunday, April 16, 2017 12:14:00 PM, Blogger Kerry O'Connor said...

This is really nicely done, Jim. Your eye for detail works very well in the limited space.

 
At Sunday, April 16, 2017 12:15:00 PM, Blogger Marian said...

Love those power lines in that photo and suggested in your line. Really nice.

 
At Sunday, April 16, 2017 2:45:00 PM, Blogger Isadora Gruye said...

I like the observation, and the photos complete the visual impact!

 
At Sunday, April 16, 2017 4:31:00 PM, Blogger De said...

Proclaiming...fading...
What more can we ask of clouds?
Love this.

 
At Sunday, April 16, 2017 5:11:00 PM, Blogger Debi Swim said...

cloudlike and clouds - nice distinction

 
At Sunday, April 16, 2017 6:02:00 PM, Blogger Sanaa Rizvi said...

This is brilliant!❤️

 
At Sunday, April 16, 2017 7:57:00 PM, Blogger Outlawyer said...

So sweet. Thanks. k.

 
At Monday, April 17, 2017 2:56:00 AM, Blogger Rosemary Nissen-Wade said...

Bravo!

 
At Monday, April 17, 2017 11:16:00 PM, Blogger Susie Clevenger said...

Clouds come and then they go... lovely image in photo and words

 

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