NaPoWriMo 2017, Day 19 -- a Poem, Love
My love for you has no end
Your smile, your humor, your compassion
Add your sweetness, the way you carry
Angel prompted, a mix made just right
'Opposites attract' they tell, peach, pear
When together, my body, my mind
Said to me, you love her, let her know
Tongue thinks only sweet morsels of praise
Together, laugh and play, sit and talk
I couldn't think of being without you
And now I hope you can love me too
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- Mrs. Jim and I have been married for 44 years.
- Photo and Poem Copyright © 2017 Jimmiehov, All Rights Reserved
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- I'm linked with Sanaa Rizvi at the Imaginary Garden with Real Toads, Poems in April - Poetry through the eyes of Carol Ann Duffy, http://withrealtoads.blogspot.com/2017/04/poems-in-april-poetry-through-eyes-of.html
- - - and - I'm linked with Sanaa Rizvi at the Imaginary Garden with Real Toads, Poems in April - Poetry through the eyes of Carol Ann Duffy, http://withrealtoads.blogspot.com/2017/04/poems-in-april-poetry-through-eyes-of.html
- to Day Nineteen of NaPoWriMo, http://www.napowrimo.net/day-nineteen-2/
- Sanaa told us about Carol Ann Duffy, the first woman Poet Laureate of Britain (link), and asked us to "write about love, using a common everyday image. Choose your own form ..." For more and Carol Ann's lovely love poem which compared the writer's love to an onion click here.
- The photo of Mrs.. Jim and me was taken by a sunbather on January 3, 2016. We were walking on the beach at Cozumel, Mexico.
- Since I have never had any poetry writing formal classes, my only learning was of some elementary fundamentals in my English classes, high school and college. I also read a few books, parts of them, and glean from the Internet. Plus sometimes the Toads have short explanations of varying forms and the like. And a lot from the Internet.
- I had never formally learned to write a love poem, so I went to the Internet and found a Poetry Site which had simple directions for writing a simple love poem. Using these directions I have written two other love poems of sorts which were well received by loving poetry group members (link to these poems plus a link having a few other off the cuff love poems and some about love.
- Here is a copy of the 1,2,3,4,5 instructions that I wrote by. I have lost the reference to them.
Now, the poem's directions:
Write a love poem
(here, written as a man telling a woman of his love for her)
1. tell how you felt when first you saw her
2. tell how you knew it was her you loved
3. tell now about being with her
4. are you happy with what you wrote, edit as necessary?5. discard thoughts that didn't fit
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Labels: Love Poem, NaPoWriMo 2017, Real Toads, Syllabic Form
9 Comments:
Mmmm. PRoud of you for teaching yoursel so much about poetry. many could learn love lessons from you two.
This is soo incredibly touching, Jim!❤️ I can relate to the feeling.. to the learning experience as I too have not had any formal training and have self learned how to write through the internet i.e various poetic forms, jargon etc. Especially love; "We blended into a sweet bundle 'Opposites attract' they tell, peach, pear When together, my body, my mind said to me, you love her, let her know." Beautifully expressed. Thank you so much for participating.❤️
Lots of love,
Sanaa
Awwww. This is a sweet love poem. :)
"Tongue thinks only sweet morsels of praise"
Nice you got me hooked there
Much love...
Super charming, and certainly a poem that someone must love to receive. Very sweet. Thanks, Jim--and cute pic. k.
so sweet ~
What a good-looking couple! Congratulations on your 44 years, and also on your gentle, happy love poem.
Beautiful Jim. i think the photo says it all.
The love and tenderness shines through every line, Jim... and through your smiles. Everything about this post says "happy together".
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